For some reason I don't trust Cristiano and I think that Jourdan is going to get herself in trouble more ways then one. She is in a country that she does not understand or speak the language.
Yeah her mistakes are going to cost her and I hope it's not a steep bill to pay.Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2015 01:33 am
i am mad that u stopped writing thisReviewer: NAYNAY Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 25 2014 09:17 am
Wait, doesn't Neymar claim that he isn't black....when he is?Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2014 02:07 am
WOW girl keep updating! I love their relationship!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2014 07:15 am
Love this story! Hopefully Neymar won't be paralyzed though..Reviewer: These short chapters are killing me!!! lol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 05:12 am
It's driving me loco that it's mispelled in Chapter 17. Columbia is a university Colombia is a country. Cambiarlo por favor!!
Damn, I'm sorry. Type-os happen sometimes thoughReviewer: colOmbia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 10:56 pm
Aww, poor things!! I can't imagine the hurt and fear going through everyone. I hope something good can come out of this.. Great update and please post more soon!! I can't wait for more :)
Oh, and I love the clips You posted to cute! ;)Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 10:38 pm
My goodness I missed you! Please update very soon! Thanks for the new chapter!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 03:30 am
Like the previous comment said, I have no idea why jourdan is STILL denying her feelings for Neymar when it's obvious that they have something more than just sexual chemistry. But anyway, I like Neymar! He has flaws just like every normal human being does. David Is way too perfect AND judgemental, two big no-no's! Jourdan deserved to get fired because she needs to grow up; and she definitely needs to realize that she's no better than Neymar...lol GREAT STORY!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 09:23 am
She just has to grow up--she wasn't that torn up over losing David and is sexually attracted to Neymar. That self-made snowball was full of lies and rocks and knocked her off her feet.
I am team David, but think he deserves better, while Neymar has shown he has a very nasty and vindictive side.
I would love to read more, but she has to become more mature and work on that character that was so promising in the beginning of the story.
Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2014 01:35 am
WTF? That is not right, I agree that it's messy but she had did a lot of great work for the team and to not even give her a chance to fix it is not cool. She is not marriaged and only working for the team.
I hope going forward she grows and realize she is a great person and truely a special person. I was hoping she found love with at least one of the them, but they BOTH are jerks, arrogant and judgemental- immature children!! She deserves much better and I wish she gets a KICK ASS job that makes them cry at how studip they were for letting her girl. *Wink Wink*
Good job with this story, it was too damn short. LOL!
Please post again soon :D
Thank you for the review! Lol, I'm pretty sure that you're the only person who actually likes Jourdan. I thought it would be unrealistic if Jourdan kept her job after the conflict. The story isn't done yet so we'll see who she ends up with.Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 04:13 am
Why is she still in denial of her feelings for Neymar? I am so glad that David told her that he didn't even want to friends with her anymore. Journdan needs to seek some therapy. Both Neymar, whi is my favorite by the way, and David are to good for her. So Journdan is staying to watch the World Cup, what will do afterwards?Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 12:38 am
I'm probably in the minority but I like Neymar, immaturity and all. I kinda hope they end up together.
Thanks for reviewing! When I put this story on this site I was surprised by how many people disliked Neymar. I'm glad that you like him.
Thanks for reviewing! When I put this story on this site I was surprised by how many people disliked Neymar. I'm glad that you like him.Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 12:03 am
(Stands with open arms) Come on David. Come let me hug you.
David was more than justified. I agree with him on the entire no violence thing but Neymar had it coming. And if Jourdan goes with Neymar I have no idea how any of them can ever be friends again. I'm glad she's finally gaining some clarity though and Alessandra? Real friend right there. Tell the truth even if the person doesn't want to hear it. It might hurt but it needed to be said. We can only see how everyone grows from this.Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 05:34 am