Great introduction. I am scored l excited about what's next.
Author's Response:
Thank you laurie94, I'm excited to get this story rolling, its all I think about is their relationship development!
Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 09:46 pm
I had to leave a review mostly because I LOVE Jason Mamoa! The fact that he is the model for the main hero makes me ecstatic lol but I digress... I'm loving this story so far and will faithfully wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing !
Author's Response:
Isn't Jason so beautiful??! I'm glad you love it! It seems that he is everyone's cup of tea!
Reviewer: interrupted Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 09:12 pm
I love it. I also love how his insecurities about what she might think of him come out at the end. It's funny how we always assume what the other party thinks of us.
Author's Response:
yes! Jason's insecurities are really important and he kind of sits in them, but we'll see more of his reasoning later. I love the idea of knowing how a man feels in a story though. I get so frustrated when I'm reading from the woman's pov all the time.
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 07:41 pm
I agree with u about the Ryan Gosling thing. ;). And I enjoyed this chapter!!
Author's Response:
Ryan Gosling is so wrong! I can only pray that he has a son that best friends with Kelly Rowland's son and that he marries Kerri Washington's daughter!
Thank you Color_me_shaaeee!
Reviewer: Color_me_shaaeee Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 05:46 pm
Great start to the story. I can't wait to see where you take us with this. Also, you had me rolling with the five things that annoy you.
Author's Response:
Thank you liltay550! I'm glad you like it! I imagine the 5 things that annoy me as a segment in a talk show. I might have to switch up and make it an annoy and love just to add a lil positivity.
Reviewer: liltay550 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 05:44 pm
Great start, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you msjonsy! I'm glad you like the beginning and I hope I can keep you interested through the end:)
Reviewer: msjonsy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 30 2014 05:33 pm
Ryan has a thing for plus sized woman why can't I meant a Ryan in real life? I can tell that this story funny and I am looking forward to reading every line.
Author's Response:
Ryan is my dream man mentally. He's gets it. All of whatever it is and I love him for that! Where is he?!!!!
Thank you pmgayles! I always love reading your reviews on other stories and I'm happy that you thought mine important enough to comment on!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 05:04 pm
I like this and want to see where it goes.... (I totally agree with your things that annoyed me this week list)
Author's Response:
Thank you dcphoenix1! I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I'm excited to see what these two have in store for us as well haha
Right?!! They're soooo annoying! All the things!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 04:49 pm
Great start. Love the subject and soon to be couple. Can't wait to read more .
Author's Response:
Thank you Stacie! I'm excited to be writing about this whole thing too, I'm interested in the dynamics between "fit" people and "nonfit" people. I think it's the jealousy on both sides that will make them an interesting couple to follow.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 04:44 pm
Great job
Author's Response:
Thank you Emy!
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 04:43 pm
can i say that i frickin love love looove this story! it's quirky, funny and the tone is something else, lool! i think this is going to be a very fun read and the length of the story is superb! thanks for sharing the story - more please!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you love it Yuukiyanagi! I always have the hardest time trying to bring humor out of my characters and I get so nervous wondering if readers will think I'm lame. Its great to know the length is up to par. I'll try to keep the chapters under 3,000 words. It shouldn't be too hard. My brain starts collapsing at like 2,500.
Thank you for being the first review!!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 04:30 pm
I can this becoming a great story and feature on the on the site.. And I like the length of the story to keep up the good work I can't wait to see how the characters develop
Author's Response:
Thank you APPLESJAXX! I'm honored that you think it's feature worthy that never even crossed my mind. I'm floored by all of the support and love I'm getting and I can say that it's a great experience. Thank you again!
Reviewer: APPLESJAXX Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 04:21 pm
Love Jason Mamoa!!
Author's Response:
Isn't he delicious! I spent like an hour "searching" for the right picture...what a great hour it was.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2014 03:52 pm