Title: Chapter 1

I love your story so far. Glad it is a Dom/sub story with characters being Asian/black, there are not many of those. I just hope you update soon and I don't have to wait months for just one update. I really really like the story it is different and unique. Thanks, update soon,very soon a86;a039; PS very nice pictures

Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 01:42 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Sorry for the long wait for chapt 3, I too hate strung out stories, but to be honest, writers' block is a bitch. I wanted to give you guys a good story. It's been playing around in my head for a while. I hope you like where I'm taking the story. And yeah, please forgive the typos.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2014 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 1

I really like you're story! Only thing I would watch out for are typos. Just wondering are you going to incorporate kinbaku into their future relationship? 



Author's Response:

I was thinking along those lines.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 09 2014 05:00 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'd prefer not to review the story at this time.  However, as someone in the BDSM lifestyle for several years, just a question and one pointer.  Is Yuan simply upset that Emi did not use his assigned title for the scene, or that she ordered him not to stop, and cursed as well?


Also, there are no such thing as Jabari knots.  They are called "Shibari Knots".  Here is a link that gives a bit of history on them.  http://www.hikarikesho.com/eng/shibari.php



Author's Response:

You are right, my only excuse (which is kind of sad in my own opinion), I was writing this late at night and was too lazy or sleepy to stop my flow to click over to google it for the correct spelling. Sorry. 

Yuan was pissed because Emi likes to disrupt his control during their scenes. He likes complete control and the fact that she defies him annoys him. He wants to control his sub's pain and pleasure, not for them to inject their own form of control as Emi does. And yes 'forgetting' to call him Sir was yet another instance of her defying him. 

Reviewer: Miki Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2014 06:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm really liking this story line can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2014 02:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

I am intrigued so please continue!!!  Cast pictures? 



Author's Response:

I am still learning. I am doing all this typing on my iPad mini lol. Give me time :) and thanks for the positive comment.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2014 04:01 am



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