New Chapter PLEASE? this story is old as the dickens at leaset uppit with a new chapter with substances...
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: January 29 2017 09:10 pm
Hopefully you continue this story at aome point. I'm interested to see where you take it.
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2015 08:44 am
This story has such great potential, you're a good writer. I hope you continue 😀
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 05:07 am
Interesting story so far! Love the cast pics!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2015 10:56 pm
Where's the story? Nice you got characters n' everythang but I've waiting on the story for like ever! *sideeye* lol
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2015 12:28 am
LOVIN' IT!!!
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2015 12:23 am
I like D/s stories and this one has potential, but you might want to consider a beta reader or editor. There were a lot of spelling and usage errors that interrupted the natural flow of the story. I'd be happy to help if you're agreeable to that.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2015 07:50 pm
who's the girl that is supposed to be Lydia? She's gorgeous
Reviewer: Alexis Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 04 2015 05:23 pm
I am loving it. Can't wait to see where this goes. I love a good D/s story.
Update Soon!!!
Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2015 05:15 pm
Love the casting! Not so hapoy with the sub/master storyline but I love a Black woman/Asian male story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 04 2015 12:02 pm