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Title: Chapter 3

New Chapter PLEASE? this story is old as the dickens at leaset uppit with a new chapter with substances...

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2017 09:10 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Hopefully you continue this story at aome point. I'm interested to see where you take it. 

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 08:44 am
Title: Chapter 3

This story has such great potential, you're a good writer. I hope you continue 😀

 Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 26 2015 05:07 am
Title: Chapter 3

Interesting story so far! Love the cast pics!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 3

LOVE!

 Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 12:11 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Where's the story? Nice you got characters n' everythang but I've waiting on the story for like ever! *sideeye* lol

 Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 12:28 am
Title: Chapter 3

LOVIN' IT!!! 

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 12:23 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like D/s stories and this one has potential, but you might want to consider a beta reader or editor.  There were a lot of spelling and usage errors that interrupted the natural flow of the story.  I'd be happy to help if you're agreeable to that.

 Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 07:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3

who's the girl that is supposed to be Lydia? She's gorgeous 

 Reviewer: Alexis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 05:23 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I am loving it. Can't wait to see where this goes. I love a good D/s story.

 

Update Soon!!!

 Reviewer: Kaye2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 05:15 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Love the casting!  Not so hapoy with the sub/master storyline but I love a Black woman/Asian male story.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2015 12:02 pm


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