Title: Paradise Circus

Okay, 1. More writing will get you more reviews (only one chapter since 2014?... I've implied enough?)

2. I'm intrigued as Jen Anon as well, but a word of warning to make the reading/comprehension smoother... try to incorporate  commas, colons, italics (for thoughts), and semi colons (for afterthoughts) into your writing. Example: "... answers will come piece by piece as she begins to cope the writing will have more clarity...). Try this: "... begins to cope, the writing will..." 

3. Please update, Yes I'm intrigued,curious, and just plain nosey/nosy.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2016 12:50 pm

Title: Paradise Circus

Intrigued by this story..dying to read the next chapter....update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and enjoying...

Reviewer: Jenny Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2014 05:29 am

Title: Paradise Circus

GOODNESS!!! This kid has been patiently waiting on your return!!! 

Author's Response: Thank you. And it's so good to have something finally out :)

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 03:46 am

Title: Paradise Circus

She's divorced, a smoker and down on her  luck.  What is doing on the side of the road? Why did she and ex-husband get divorced?  Is Angela a reporter for for newspaper or tv station?

Author's Response: Yay, first reviewer! Well she's a bit of a work in progress... She's checked out on certain aspects of her life, she's a writer (novelist) but there hasn't been much of that. A lot of those answers will come piece by piece as she begins to cope the writing will have more clarity... I really was trying to convey her fractured state of mind. She's a successful in her career but it hasn't correlated with her personal life (a la divorced and barely supporting her daughter emotionally).

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2014 02:21 am

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