What if Salina get's her memory back Storm? I know you are trying to protect, because when she remembers Sally will will think she's not good enough for you and run away. Thank you for updating this phenonmenal story.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07 2017 02:20 am
I been following this story; I'm thinking I missed something due to the time between updates. Was Salina unaware she was not a virgin when she first had sex? She is in the medical field and never looked at her own medical records? The person she is; with her need to know everything about herself; I'm thinking she would have read them. Was the man with Churn one of her rapists? Her subconcious obviously remembers him. What is the time frame from rape to leaving the hospital after the coma, did she bare a child by her rapist? Also; what is to stop her from being killed now that the other players know they are not going to get any additional monies from her father's estate? There is no more incentive to keep her alive, unless there is a child to inherit. in fact it makes more sense to kill her, use her land for nefarious purposes and by the time anyone figures out the port is being used they would have made more than enough money to just abandon the port. Sorry for the questions but I feel as if I am lost or maybe I'm confusing this story with another.Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2017 04:28 am
Thank you for updating!! Storm now knows which Sally is, but there is another name used in an earlier chapter. I think the name was Lily, how many names does Sally have? Why would the DEA involved with a no-drug related murder case of a Caribbean investment broken?Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 13 2017 05:50 am
Please don't stay away so long. Update soon.Reviewer: connie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2017 08:29 am
i liked that ending, very cool and domineering.Reviewer: Swirly_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 09:06 am
When I pick a story to read on Valentchamber, word count is like last on my list. I look at the summary (is it interesting, unique or ru of the mill tale, does the plot or situation make sense, or is it a run away train of this and that).
Forgive my clichés... But, in a nut shell I prefer quality over quantity. There are some short stories on here that are great reads and long-ass stories that make me skip paragraphs or even worse, quit the tale midway.
just write your stuff, heck people still follow the story, so obviously it's good, ya got me hooked...lolReviewer: Swirly_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 08:23 am