Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: A Chance Meeting

Ch. 2

Good chapter, but your characters could have more physical descriptions. Walnut complexion... pretty good. I don't recall Storm getting described, if u did, my bad, sorry.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 07:27 am

Title: A Chance Meeting

I had the feeling that Rhonda couldn't be trusted.  How are Sally and Rhonda friends? Why is Sally using a bike that isn't registered in her name? I am liking this story, I can appreciate how build the story with each new chapter. Excellent! !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 01:06 pm

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