okay, loving the story.
Let's get ths stalker caught. He is a sorry cop and seems to have some mental problems. So far as Rhonda is concern, if she is involved with break ins she needs to get her head together or suffer the consequences.
Now Sally. I believe she has some inkling about Rhonda possibly being involved with the robberies; maybe from reading the newspaper/tv or whatever. Sally is coming to understand she is falling for Storm, who seems to be ready to give his love to a wife and family.
However, Storm needs to really put his foot down with Audrey. He needs to deal with her face to face before she really goes nuts. He saw the display of her foolishness on camera. That type of behavior indicates she is not too stable. She needs to be dealt with.
Now when will the update be posted??????Reviewer: A storm seems to be coming! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 05:24 pm
After reading these chapters I have to say that I don't like it. Not because it's badly written but because I feel like somehow you've stripped the story bare and it no longer has the soul that it had. The names feel all wrong and the small details feel like they're missing, ie the connection and chemistry that Storm had with Salina, I'm not feeling it with Storm and Sandy.
It's still early days though so I hope it gets better.
Good luck!Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17 2014 08:42 am
Yes, Sally is admitting her attraction to Storm. By the way, I love the name Storm!! Audrey is cray cray, Storm needs to get rid of her quickly!! I am looking forward to Sally opening up to Storm about her stalker.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 03:36 pm