Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: Invitation Accepted

I like Storm, but back when he was pissed that Sally left him the morning after, that pissed me off. She was right he had done that before on numerous occassions. Okay fine. They had an argument and went their separate ways for a minute. They were not in a relationship, I know, but Storm slept with five women and possibly more, but still can't get Sally off his mind. WTF!! Yes, Sally kissed whoever she was with. Okay I get that too, but Sally was not off effin everything with legs and to make it okay say, 'I had to think of Sally to finish.' Would he care if Sally slept with six men and say she only did it because she was trying to chase that feeling with him away. I'll answer that, YES he would care. But the only reason this is not an issue is because Sally will never know. Yeah, he had better showed her those STD free papers. I know them not being together is the important part, but if they were together and they argued would he just go on a f*ckin spee? The story has progressed since then, but Storm made me sick in that chapter. This is a great story, but Storm gets on my nerves.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 02:27 am

Title: Invitation Accepted

Sally is Sooooooooooo:::quick breath:::oooooooo  frustrating.  Storm has the patience of Job.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 06:49 am

Title: Invitation Accepted

Sally is a mystery.  I hope the readers get to learn more about her soon.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Invitation Accepted

Happy Resurrection day to youl. Why is Sally so stupid?   Team Storm!!!!Love Mike too!  Sally quit fighting storm!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 08:51 pm

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