Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: Come Closer To Me

When I pick a story to read on Valentchamber, word count is like last on my list. I look at the summary (is it interesting, unique or ru of the mill tale, does the plot or situation make sense, or is it a run away train of this and that). 

Forgive my clichés... But, in a nut shell I prefer quality over quantity. There are some short stories on here that are great reads and long-ass stories that make me skip paragraphs or even worse, quit the tale midway.

just write your stuff, heck people still follow the story, so obviously it's good, ya got me

Reviewer: Swirly_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 08:23 am

Title: Come Closer To Me

Good update. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2015 08:55 am

Title: Come Closer To Me

I hope she gives him a chance and moves in with him, don't be a chicken.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2015 05:39 am

Title: Come Closer To Me

First, I want to wish you much success in your business!  The first in a, brand new business is crazy hectic so I don't see yu having the time to update twic in month.  A double update when you have time works for me.

Sally is irking me, Ronda is not worth your time, it is only a matter of time before the police catch her and Katie and Katie will throw her under the bus. So the hoosegau is in her future.  Is Sally in the witness protection program?  Was it her handler on the phone asking her about Mitch? Why is she still zpending time with Mtch?  For some on the run she is too trusting and not of the riight people. Trust Storm , Ayasha, Mike and Colin Sally.

Who is,checking into her backgroud, is it Storm's evil mother? Where is officer Eastman?  I know Sally will say no to moving in with Storm be ause she's stupid  that way. Thanks cor updating, I love this story!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 12:45 pm

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