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Title: The Friends You Keep

Waiting on an update!!!!

Reviewer: Casey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 11:05 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

Thank you for sharing this wonderful chapter.. Great Job

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2016 02:50 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

I really like Storm, he has a good character money hasn't made him into something else.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 24 2016 12:10 am

Title: The Friends You Keep

I hope Sally opens up to Storm again. I feel bad for Jessica, she needs to leave this idiot. Obviously she doesn't think she's worth more than she's receiving. Great update. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 05:00 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

Sally is a piece of work.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 03:30 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

What time jumps?  I don't recall reading any time jumps, hell I don't remember there being any flashbacks.  This is your story so tell it how you want!!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 02:22 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

Sally works my last nerve, Storm has never treated her like a possession although he  is possessive.  i don't recall him even raising his voice at her in anger. Sally does frustrate him,  she is always finding excuses to push him away.  Sally, for somone so smart you are dumb as hell!!  To beleive Jessica who was jealous over what you know to he true of Storm is stupid!!  Sally doesn't deserve Storm's love she is an emotionally scarred child in a grown woman's body.  Team Storm!!  Can't stand Sally!!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 02:15 pm

Title: The Friends You Keep

I love Storm...you've portrayed him as a really good man who adores Sally... you have not given us much to work with in terms of Sally's history...I hope you will remedy that for us soon...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2016 05:31 am



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