Reviews For Trust - Revision
Title: Disappearing Mirage

i liked that ending, very cool and domineering.

Reviewer: Swirly_girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2016 09:06 am

Title: Disappearing Mirage

Thanks for the update.  Love Storm, he's fighting to keep his woman.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 07:03 am

Title: Disappearing Mirage

Storm makes me sick. If it were any other man I would say yes he has a very good point. Some man spedning the night with his girlfriend that he does not know. But, as Storm said he slept with several women when Sally was pissed at him. Now he looses his shit because Mitch spends the night? Sally is right he probably cannot spend the night with a woman without having sex with her and automatically assumes Sally could not do the same.  

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 05:26 pm

Title: Disappearing Mirage

Sally makes my teeth itch!!  I am tired of wishy wash tail, why get into a relationship wtih Storm if she doesn't plan on staying in it.  I understand that she has had a hard life but Storm didn't do any of those bad things to her.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 02:47 am

Title: Disappearing Mirage

Good will be missed but I will read when you return...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 12:27 am

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