Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 1

This is pretty mysterious and a bit intense. I like it.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 1

Is this going to be a tear jerker? Good looking cast!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 09:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am a little confused as to who "she" is. "I  told him she wouldn't go, and I  wasn't but there was something in his voice that told me to give him a chance"  other than that I  liked it. 



Author's Response:

Rookie mistake I need to fix that, Thanks for pointing that out!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 09:22 pm



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