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Title: Chapter 41

Well written and tear inducing.
I hope Savannah doesn't break down from hearing her families history.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 12:21 pm

Title: Chapter 41

Squueee!!!! Love it! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 09:23 am

Title: Chapter 41

God don't like ugly.

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2015 05:40 am

Title: Chapter 40

I'm starting to get emotional now... I don't want this to end!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 10:11 am

Title: Chapter 40

Love the wedding I wonder what happened to Camille bio family.

Reviewer: JoVanAdDek Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 06:24 am

Title: Chapter 40

If there were two people that deserved a Happy Ending its Hiram and Camille, thety have been through so much and stayed stong and together though it all... the wedding was Perfect, and its great that both Steven and Savannah are so happy.,, and the Twins were a great suprise.

 

Reviewer: rocky balboa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2015 02:39 am

Title: Chapter 40

Very touching ending.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 07:32 pm

Title: Chapter 40

I have loved reading this story & this chapter was just so sweet & loving the wedding scene I couldn't help but shed tears of joy. Then the announcement of them being preggers, then having twins. Wow can't wait for the next update I love surprises & this story has had many of them.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 03:23 pm

Title: Chapter 40

So awesome!!  Will the confrontation with her parents happen in the epilogue??  They had twin boys, so awesome!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 01:07 pm

Title: Chapter 40

I'm so happy for them. Such a great story. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 08:03 am

Title: Chapter 40

I am so glad they are living happily ever after and having twin boys? Whoa! They deserved it.

I don't know if this wasn't in your plan but I really want Camille make one final attempt to see her family that disowned her. I feel like if Camille takes the power they had over her, then she can live a free life. That is just my opinion. I know a man can make a woman feel beautiful and on top of the world but it always start with yourself and once Camille confronts with her demons like Hiram had to confront his with family by protecting his own family and getting rid of his racist family, then Camille can live in peace and wash her hands free of her biological family.

These are my own thoughts; however, I hate to see this story comes to an end because I love it so freaking much. You did a good job and you are a gifted writer.

Reviewer: Luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 40

I wish her family could see her now. Assholes. So happy they are getting thier happy ending. 

Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 05:18 am

Title: Chapter 40

Loved reading this story! Glad they got a happy ending!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 20 2015 04:48 am

Title: Chapter 39

Damn what a wonderful story. I need to be published. Oh wow that was wonderful thank you.

Reviewer: Jess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 16 2015 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 39

I am loving this story to the very end. Thanks for giving us readers a truthful love story even with the ugliness. It made the beautiful parts even better!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2015 11:53 am

Title: Chapter 39

Not ready for this to end its been brilliant!!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 11:10 pm

Title: Chapter 39

I was so excited to see an up date & you didn't disappoint. Finally after everything Harim name is not only on Savanahs papers but also Stevens. Only good things on the horizon with the wedding around the corner can't wait for the next update although the end this journey it was well worth the ride.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 39

This is an amazaing story.  I have enjoyed every moment of it.

Reviewer: Leigh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 39

Glad their family is now complete. I really hope, Camille's birth family get what's finally coming to them. What they did to her was heartless. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 02:19 pm

Title: Chapter 39

Very good update.  I wondering when Camille family was going to make appearances?

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 12:23 pm

Title: Chapter 39

Love this family. I'm so glad they are all safe and happy.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 07:05 am

Title: Chapter 39

Finally Steven is now loved  and safe!!   is such a cutie!! Looking forward to reading about the wedding.  Are the parents going to show up?   This update was sweet but much to short.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 03:56 am

Title: Chapter 39

Loved the update! Glad Camille and Hiram seem to be getting their happy ending!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 14 2015 03:33 am

Title: Prologue

Good story. The grammar and spelling, however, could use some work.

Reviewer: bonitaRI Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2015 11:33 pm

Title: Prologue

I have not read the latest chapters for this story, so my suggestions may be off or already done, but I do have an idea of how to bring Camille's family around, if interested, hit me up on my story review Cheung's New Sub... look for my pen name. I think u may like my idea.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 03:10 am



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