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Title: Chapter 36

Another great cliffhanger!

I'm so glad Debbie went over the cliff.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 10:12 pm

Title: Chapter 36

This update was very surreal. It kind of seems out of character for both of them just to let Debbie fall to her death. I mean Hiram prying her fingers off of Camille? Hmm...I don't know. I'll be waiting for the next update. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter 36

This chapter is so good; however, are you going to let Camille have a confrontation with her biological parents as well and this time she brings Hiram and her kids with her?

Reviewer: luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 02:07 pm

Title: Chapter 36

This was great. Debbie's crazy ass got what she deserved.  I'm glad Hiram saved Camille before psychoi Debbie tried to do her in.  How are all of these fools able to surround Hiram and he kicked ther asses still.  They are dumb.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 36

So glad Debbie is dead. She needed to go. I hope the police has rounded up the rest of those klansmen.  Could Camille's family that abandoned her get their comeuppance. They shouldn't get away with what they did to her. I hope all of Hiram's family burns in the hottest pits of hell. They suck so bad. It would be awesome if Camille gets pregnant. Looking forward to and update. 

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 01:28 pm

Title: Chapter 36

Debbie is dead and I couldn't be happier! That how was crazy but just to be safe the police need to drag that river.  Evil doesn't die it just festers. I hop epthat Camille is alright? Will her punk @$$ family show up at the hospital like they care! Awesome sauce!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 03:43 am

Title: Chapter 35

What a thirsty bitch

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 08:41 am

Title: Prologue

The person writing this story and anyone that actually likes it is just as awful, ridiculous, and disgusting as this story itself

Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 35

Did Hiram or Camille have any guns or knives or something to protect themselves ......I mean since they had to know that those idoits could be waiting for them to show up?

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 05:33 am

Title: Chapter 35

Oh God!!! I'm glad the babies are safe, but I'm scared for Hiram and Camille.  I hope Camille whoops Debbies ass. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2015 08:05 pm

Title: Chapter 35

This was a good suspenseful chapter that I was nervous to read the ending.

I want to commend you on writing a story that for most was a difficult pairing.

My grandparents are from Mississippi and North Carolina and have to me how life was in the early 1900s. I live in Pennsylvania where the racism is hidden or disguised as I'm sure it is now all over the US.

You impressed me with your attention to detail and the conflicting emotions in the characters.

Thank you again for this tale of acceptance, forgiveness, love and redemption.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 06:40 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Okay, I'm ready for these sick crazy bastids to be dealt with.  I hope the whole church congregation is out in the surrounding woods with their shotguns pointed toward these evil klansmen.  It's time to handle business.  We all know the Lord helps those who helps themselves.  Come on Rev, let's have you lead the charge.  

Awaiting your next update.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 35

I knew this day was coming. I'm just glad the kids aren't there to see this. And Debbie, my she rest in hell.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Omg! I'm so scared for them! Please! Please don't let anything happen to Hiram and Camille!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 05:11 am

Title: Chapter 35

WOW, That was powerful. Hate is such an ugly word and it leads people to do ugly things.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2015 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 35

Holy shit!!! This just got real. I can't believe they did that. Stupid idiots!!! You want them to come back so bad but you destroy their cabin so they know you've been there. I can't believe they did all of that. They want to hang a child?!!! This girl has no idea what is going on let alone cause any harm to any of them and your going to hang her? You don't even treat animals that way. All of this because this man doesn't want to be a Klansman or date some stupid ass spoiled girl. You can not be damn serious. I hope Hiram finds a way to kill all of their asses. They don't deserve to live and I truly hope that Camille toughens up and kicks ass. You can't always be scared. You have to learn to fight one day. The present is the best time. Hang every last one of them and send their body parts to their family or something sick. 

Update soon please!!! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 35

Are the Klan that bloodthirsty that they would threaten little Savannah she's just a baby I found that noose hung doll on her crib mobile the most disturbing. Are you going to fill up the rest of April, May, June and July or just have the climax now and skip to the co parent year ending in August?  Great update

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:56 am

Title: Chapter 35

I'm glad they are moving up state. It was very wise of them to leave the kids while they went back to finalize some things. Hopefully they straighten the clan out. Now that they are back & have heard & saw what's going on hope they have a plan. The kids are safe & that's what matters the most to them so facing & dealing with them shouldn't be to hard.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 35

That group of bandits need a reality check! Hope Hiram and Camille survive the nightmare! Glad the kids are safe. Love the update!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 22 2015 03:28 am

Title: Chapter 35

O m g, that is some craaaaazy ass shit. I'm so scared for these two, I hope, pray to gawd Hiram and Camille went home strapped. They forreal need a couple of pieces coz somebody gotta die and it bet not be them!

Reviewer: Kisa Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Please updt soon I die if I got wait another month without new chapter...  Debbie 2 crazy

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 10:42 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Oh crap is all can say

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 10:33 pm

Title: Chapter 35

Great update but please keep my favourite couple safe

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 08:13 pm

Title: Chapter 35

I am thrilled that they left the babies back in New York, but Stevie is so frightened. My heart goes out Stevie but now he knows love thanks to his Uncle Hiram and Camille. He now knows what a real family is like.  Debbie the slut puppy I see is back, she's like that roach that gets caught when the light turns on the kitchen.  When is Hobbie going to meet her maker, Satan?  C-I-L-L the Klan!!!  Great chapter marchpieces!  

Why didn't they call the police before going to the cabin? The Klan may act as ruthless as vampires but they don't burn up in sunlight! Hell holy water don't even work on them!  Caleb is going to end them all and I can't wait.  Hobbie will be Bertha's @itch in the hoosegau!

I give this update two thumbs up! In otherwords, awesome sauce!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 07:34 pm

Title: Chapter 35

was already tearing up and i hadn't even read the through the 1st paragraph, awesome writing :D 

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 07:27 pm



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