That was great. I never thought Savvy would think that. Brought tears to my eyes
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 04:00 am
Wonderful story about a very sensitive subject. You did the characters justice. Can't wait to read your next work.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 03:46 am
Savannah's speech made me cry. Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 03:35 am
I feel bad for Camille. Fuck Mildred. Its sad that Camille missed that opportunity for closure.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 03:33 am
No that old racist bitch would die because she's stuck in her damn ways. You're about to die and the one person that could save your life is the one you continue to disrespect? Fuck off. Have fun in hell.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 02:54 am
The Baxters should all die off. They suck so bad. And rotten to the end. I'm glad that Camille said good riddence to those jerks. Glad Savannah and Ethan are together and happy for the whole family. Nice ending.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 02:43 am
Okay... Very interesting. Yeah, Steven's parents would have killed over. Lol
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 02:27 am
Wonderful story and I loved the epilogue!
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 02:16 am
Excellent ending
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 01:56 am
I enjoyed it very much, thank you for finishing this well written story...
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 01:54 am
Loved it!!!
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 01:51 am
I have LOVED this story from start to finish, you are a talented writer and its been a pleasure reading Hiram and Camille's story, and so glad that all the kids are thriving... as for the Baxters, you Reap what you Sow.
I may decide to read this one again.... I would love to go on this journey again.
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 01:13 am
I can't believe we have been reading about Camille and Hiram that long. I enjoyed the story and loved the way it ended.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 26 2015 12:02 am
Yes, I love a story with happy endings!! Baxter's received a visit from karma repeatedly, just desserts I say!! I give this story two thumbs up!! Marchpisces92 you are the sugady!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2015 11:21 pm
What a beautiful ending to this story. The Baxters got what they deserved, Stevie got what he deserved, Savannah got what she deserved, Hiram and Camille got what they deserved, which is happiness and a beautiful growing family. Aaron, Alex and Logan are becoming Good upstanding men. Savannah became a author, college graduate and now future Wife to the man of her dreams Ethan. " COLORLESS" on Oprah's book club list, I say CLAIM!!! that for yourself MARCHPISCES92. Thanks for this wonderful story you have blessed us with MP.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2015 10:18 pm
So good!! I loved all of it!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2015 10:17 pm
Savvy's family tree project was superb, Chelsea wish she had that much knowledge and family history to compete with Savannah. Savannah's bat mitzvah was a beautiful ceremony, the words were elegantly stated. I'm glad Ethan came to Savvy's party and gave her, her first kiss. Thanks for the update MP
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2015 10:02 pm
Great story from beginning to end !!!!
Reviewer: queenbee Signed [Report This]Date: October 25 2015 09:52 pm
Thank You, for allowing Camille to tell those Baxter Biddies and Bastards where to shove their ungrateful, prejudice ass comments! I even felt THAT slap! Good Riddance to them. They will need her again! I am glad that Savannah and Camille can now move on with their lives.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2015 11:20 pm
Oh I'm crying. It was perfect. Those Baxters are a mean bunch, even the grandkids. It's terrible and not one of them feels bad fir Camille or thinks differently! So sad.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2015 05:59 pm
Please you have got write what happen to the baxters kids because they deserve to get their just reward for treating Camile so dirty
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2015 12:30 pm
Camille and Savvy have such a special relationship. I like fact that they can talk about anything.
I'm glad Camille has also let go her past with the Baxters.
Date: October 14 2015 04:41 am
Mannnnn those Baxter better get their lives together I wish they would have learned more of a lesson it was like talking to a brick wall with them. Glad Camille was able to throw a few punches should of knocked those twins down a few pegs.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2015 02:03 am
So the Baxters learn nothing, in fact they will pass down their ignorance to another generation. That's just sad and a bit unsatisfying but hey at least Camille doesn't have to deal with their ish anymore. I hope Ethan shows up to Savvy's Bat Mitzvah. It would serve that other girl right if no one showed up at her party.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: October 14 2015 12:36 am
Very good chapter, thank you for sharing
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2015 11:59 pm