Wills is a tease and is enjoying every minute of Talia's reaction...Talia better prepare herself, cuz Wills likes to play Games..
The vivid pictures you paint of Florence, is just Beautiful!!!
I Love the humor in the story...I laughed so hard I got a cramp in my side...Thank you!
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 03:21 am
Will seems to be working awfully hard to throw that red herring... But the why isn't so clear.
it's ok if Talia wants a ONS. She's young and feels jilted... Keep it coming!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 07 2014 08:35 am
Why did Talia cook for them? William seems like womanizer while Diana is a lush. I am reserving my opinion on Elizabeth and Colin.
Sorry if it wasn't made clear in the story but Talia cooks for them because they decided to have a home meal while the rest of the group explored florence given that Talia already knows the city.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2014 09:28 pm
@pmgayles: what's wrong with going off on a weekend with some classmates? To a city she is familiar with? It's not as if she couldn't hold her plane ticket or had to relinquish her passport.Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 10:27 am
thanks for posting!
Apart from a little mess from the grammat-gremlins: "have not have been", you have a very promising story here. Looking forward to more.
PS- one guy travelling with 5 beauties!? How'd he get so lucky? I hope they're not all going to fight for him!
I hate grammar grrr hahahaReviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2014 10:21 am
Was Talia lying to herself about being not being sexually attracted to Jake? Did she think that Jake waa going to settle for being married to her with no love involved? Who is this Adriana person? Talia just meets this woman in a foreign country and takes a trip with her to another country, too trusting. I have feeling that the situation that she ends up in is because of friendship with Adriana. Because she allows other people's opinions to sway her from she internally knows to ne right. Dumb, dumb ditty!
Hmm interesting review.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2014 01:17 pm