Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Submit a Review
Title: Chapter 8

Definitely time to move on. In actions, even if not in feelings. Dude is a punk when it comes to her

 Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 02:28 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Adaline should move on.  I'm liking Dominic less and less.  Let's give Murphy a shot!  

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 02:18 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Dominic is an asshole!!

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 02:12 pm
Title: Cast

Love it but it was too short. More coming I hope?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 01:20 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Dominic is a dick...and as such Addie should move on, but not before she gives him a straight up sign language cussing!  To bad Dom is so easily swayed by outside forces, they would have made a cute couple.

Why do men always want a woman who doesn't want or is good for them... but the one person that has been and will be there he, uses, abuses, overlooks, ignores and mistreats? All in the name of saving face?

Yeah Adaline give Murphy a chance, he will love you for you...and he will never be embarrassed to be seen with you!

Love the update, I am excited for the sign language use by the characters.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 12:43 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Dom is a bit of a Jerk, I so want Adaline to give Murphy a chance, then maybe Dom will see the right woman has been right in front of him for yrs, he's just been too Shallow to see it.

So glad that Addie has great friends like Lucille, Teagan and Sasha 

 Reviewer: rockybalboa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 12:35 pm
Title: Chapter 8

Please get her to move on this is so sad to read she is! Weak, Pitiful, I just can't. She is the girl in the story that scares everyone with her stalker behavior. This is really getting weird.

 Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:56 am
Title: Chapter 8

Move on! If you want to redeem Dominic later, and maybe even get them together, it's fine. However, he has a lot of growing up to do, if his actions and his taste in women are any indication. In the meantime, Adeline shouldn't wait on him. She needs to live her life, just as Sasha lived her life before Dimitri changed. If Dimitri hadn't come back, she would have found a way to be happy with a good career and a good man. Adeline needs to have that same assurance that she can live without this man.

 Reviewer: Tired of him Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:53 am
Title: Chapter 8

Move on but don't string along another man. Give Murphy a chance but explain to him that you are moving on from loving a man that didn't love you. Dominic is heartless in his treatment of Adaline. Addy dating other men and getting over some of her insecurities would make her more attractive to Dom. He is the worse type of person, to know that someone cares ans to completely ignore that person is cruel. Dom  needs to tell her that she has no chance to win his heart and let her move on.  

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 11:18 am
Title: Chapter 8

Oh, she definitely needs to move on. Also, if he is drawn to shallow women then he can have them.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 09:38 am
Title: Chapter 8

Dominic is a such an asshole; if he is still ashamed of being friends with her and can't be bothered to check his date or friends, then she needs to stop giving him her time and friendship. Teagan has been a better friend to her in the short time period they've known each other than Dominic.  Perhaps he'll see the light when he realizes that she no longer is infactuated with him and has moved on, but I doubt it.  Adaline should give Murphy a chance, but she needs to be honest with him prior to them possibly interacting with Dominic in the future.  It just could be that her and Murphy are better off friends, but she'll won't know for sure unless she puts herself out there.  

Please hurry with the updates!  

 Reviewer: BellaLuna7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 09:22 am
Title: Chapter 8

Jeez. Dominic is such a dickwad. I just wish Adalinedidn't have to be hurt for us to see that. Time for Murphy to step up to the plate. Give her some more self-confidence.

don't be such a stranger! LOL!

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 07:39 am
Title: Chapter 8

No this is Adaline and Dominic's story, don't change the pairing. Adeline's nasty cousin can't be proven right. Dominic needs to work for Adeline's love and forgiveness.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 8

So our boy has feet of clay...I am so disappointed in him.  I hope you make Dom beg a long time to get back into her good graces.  All this time wasted--now Ada sees he is not her friend and he didn't even care enough to check up on her. 

Before she gives Murphy false hopes, I think she should tell him how she felt about Dom.  It was not healthy the way Ada worshiped him and it is not healthy the way Murphy is starting to worship her.  

I hope she and Murph can be good friends, but for now Ada needs to live her life the way she wants and no longer harbour hopes where Dom is concerned--he is unworthy of her.  

You can't make someone love you when they don't even really see you.

Love Sasha and Dimitry still, but Dom's got my right foot twitching. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 06:44 am
Title: Chapter 8

PLEASE I BEG YOU!! Whatever direction u go next just please post again ASAP :)) I love this story and each chapter leaves me wanting for couples months! I don't care if it's small chapters jst update soon like tomorrow lol I personally can't wait to read the chapter when Dominic realises he has been real shitty and n ass of a friend. And Would love for Adeline to have a man show her how she deserves to be treated and make Dominic work his arse off to get her back! :)))) 

 Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 06:35 am
Title: Chapter 8

I think the chapter's should be longer. I'd rather wait a while for a good chapter, then get small chapter's where nothing really happens for half of the time.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 06:15 am
Title: Chapter 8

Move on show him what he missing 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 05:50 am
Title: Chapter 8

How do you sign, KISS MY ASS? 'Cause that is exactly what Addy needs to tell Dom.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 05:33 am
Title: Chapter 8

I think it's time for Adaline to speak up for herself. I'm disgusted by Dominic and his date. Please let Adaline move on to someone who actually cares for her. Sorry. Dominic is a loser. I once liked him... but with this latest chapter, I find him undeserving of even a friendship with Adaline. Thank God Dina's little girl is not his daughter.

 Reviewer: Calikidd44 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2015 05:22 am
Title: Cast

More Adeline and Murphy, please! Sometimes, you snooze, you lose. Dominic has been snoozing on Adeline since they were kids. He was just as dismissive of her as a female as her family was dismissive of her as a person. It's time for her to move on. It would be a shame for Dominic to miss out on someone who is truly capable of offering him a deep and abiding love, but you don't miss your water..., that ship has sailed, you slept on that one...etc. You get the point. So far, I like Murphy. He seems to be just her speed, and clearly returning her interest. Please come back, soon. We have missed you!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 03:30 am
Title: Chapter 7

GGreat chapter! I believe thr baby is Slades' s!!! Can't wait otbsurr what happens next! 

 Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 12:08 am
Title: Chapter 7

Great update I have missed this story.

I do believe that Dom has realized who Dina cheated with and who it the father of her daughter but then I could be over thinking things.

Murphy seems like a cook guy and would be able to boost her confidence and get her started on dating.

Thank you for the update and good luck on getting Sasha: Wallflower up and going on Amazon soon.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 05:10 pm
Title: Chapter 7

I actually don't mind the Dominic/Dina thing because he's gotta get over this before he can move on. Found it funny when he finally realized who the dad is lol Slade right. Jokes. Can't wait for te Slade/Dina reunion... what even happened there? 

Also lol I see Murphy out there catching sneak peeks okay okay.

Can't wait to see what happens next and when Dominic and girl Adaline finally get it on and poppin' yay!!!

 

Thanks for the chapter

 Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 02:02 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Slade is Sofia's father...I knew it! Addis has made friends...real friends now maybe she can find love and happiness.

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 01:56 pm
Title: Cast

I don't know, I have a weird feeling about this Murphy character. He seems too perfect. But maybe I'm being paranoid lol. Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Awesome job!!!! 

 Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 05:36 am


Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.