Reviews For Adaline:The Silent
Title: Chapter 9

It's too late baby, it's too late!! Dom8nic you are really stupid, but I am glad that you pumked out because  now Adaline can move to a man who is free to love her as ahe should be loved.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 04:50 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Adeline just needs to keep working on herself and get out in the world and date. Build her self esteem and stand up for herself rather she care about their opinion of her or not. Speak up and be heard.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:54 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Good for her!!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:10 pm

Title: Chapter 9

That wad her kiss goodbye and hopefully she'll realize her worth with someone who wants to truly know her.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 08:22 am

Title: Chapter 9

Good.  At least he dumped the tramp and came back to apologize.  Also I'm proud of Adaline. She told him how she felt and kissed him. Big brave move!!! He isn't ready and he doesn't deserve her yet!! Let her experience life some, then he can come begging and pining away for her! Great update. 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 9

For Dom this was the only decent thing for him to do. He is absolutely no good to anyone right now. He needs time to get over what Dina did to him. Period. Who would want him like this right now anyway.

And Addy needs to get perspective as well.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 04:50 am

Title: Chapter 9

No, I like what you did. You see, Dominic is due to suffer heartache; and Dina doesn't count. Please make sure Adaline stays strong. Let his rejection fuel her determination to move on to a real relationship with Murphy or some other guy (a good guy) beyond Dominic. Dom's rich, handsome, and entitled. Yeah, Dina broke his heart, but he needs to realize that Adaline is the "one that got away." He deserves to go through it over Adaline... Especially for Carla's (miss entitled) benefit. Please make him act like a damn fool for Adaline, he so deserves her disregard. Yeah, Dom is a nice guy, but he never stood up for in the past, he needs to an up... publicly.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:24 am

Title: Cast

I'm sooooooooo happy for Adaline ! She finally coming to her own and more open to speaking her mind. Glad she finally confronted Dominic and he knows what he's missed out on but he needs to get his emotions together. I hope the next chapter is about Adaline getting out into the dating world, she's moped over Dominic for too many years she deserves to move on and find happiness.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:21 am

Title: Chapter 9

The last bit doesn't make sense...if adaline knows Dominic has feelings for her how would it be a catalyst for her to move on so abruptly.. I thought  she would be confused or curious as to y he's holding himself back..planning to reject him later makes her sound petty..dominic wasnt harsh to her like dmitri was to sasha before and neither was dominic dating her..its the first time he realizes tht he has feelings for her tht goes beyond friendship... Looks like hes still hurting after Dina he's not ready to date again..but he could use a friend to confide in..he seems to be bottling up too much..it would be nice if adaline could be tht friend and help him get over whts really troubling him..

Reviewer: Jenny Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 03:17 am

Title: Chapter 9

Also, since Addy is a virgin--she should not regret it at all if she finds a wonderful, caring lover.

 Right now I don't feel as if Dom is worthy of her first time.  Perhaps after time has past and he greatly regrets pushing her away, he can bring the fire and passion...

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 9

At last, I feel that chemistry between these two and there wasn't even any tongue.

I hope Addy make it as hard for Dom as Sasha did for Dimi.  I understand where Dom is coming from:  he is still in too much pain to give his all to Addy and deserve more.

Glad Addy is starting to realize her worth.  I say move on and if it is meant to be then it will be; don't put your life on hold waiting for someone who don't know your worth.

Will she get rid of that photo of their bench?  My first thought was 'sell it', but that would be impulsive, and it is part of her past--so I say blow it up and sell it (maybe Dom will buy it).  

Addy will always have a certain wistfulness about her, but she can be happy without Dom in her life.  

I liked the boldness you gave Addy and even Dom is getting his backbone back--well done--thank you for the update!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 9

This girl has it bad. she says she's moving on but lets be real she's the kind of girl who never gets over her first love. Yeah she'll date other guys but she will always compare them to Dom and he will always be in the back of her mind. I don't think she is able to really love another man other than Dom.

Reviewer: kiki Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 9

I am glad Adaline finally made her move. I am excited about the next update! 

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 12:25 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh what a fool you are Dominic didnt you learn nothing when something of the same happened to your brother. Well shes got her answer & is letting him go. But hes gonna regret this when he see's her with someone else I bet his reaction isnt gonna be pleasant & hes gonna be jealous as heck; he brought this on himself. Cant wait to see how he handles her moving on.

Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 11:56 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Fantastic update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 11:29 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Adaline, go and find yourself girl. Gain some confidence and experience. Love yourself so you can demand to be treated the way you deserve. 

Dominic, get your life. 

I do appreciate the honesty of their conversation and the revelations that came about. It is time for everyone to move on and go their separate ways. At least for now. There is a lot of growth to be done and time is the only way for that to happen. This is a good start for that. 

Thank you SO much for the update! Loved it. 

Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 10:46 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad Dominic put the trash out at the curb(Audrey). Damn! Adaline jumped right in there and took what she wanted good for her. Dominic is a basket case, he needs to find himself first before he touch one more women. Hot damn! Adaline found her voice about time, she needs to explore more give someone else a try. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 10:34 pm

Title: Cast

Dominic is simply not worthy of Adaline. I have to admit I was mad when she kissed Dom. he is not a true friend and I don't think he ever was. I will be ecstatic when she moves on and he catches the green eyed monster. She has been through so much and deserves happiness, especially a man who will truly adore her.

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 10:18 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I was wondering when you would let the thundering lightening bolt of "duh/realization" hit her on the head. 

Please, please let her move on with Murphy and Carter. This girl has yet to realize her worth. Um her snooty cousin is coming back and Adealine has to gird up her backbone and self-esteem.

I think Dom needs a tablespoon of the "Sasha 3 yr. abstinence" cure. I can't say prevention, because his jerkiness, coward-ness, and pathetic personally has already been established.

(Great story lines, I love the build up of this story!)

Please make him suffer and wake up and smell the coffee late. Please.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 01:50 pm

Title: Chapter 8

If Dominic considers Adaline a friend there really is no reason for him to treat her so.  I know he has some issues but he was wrong with the way he was behaving in front of his date.  If I was Adaline I wouldn't even bother with him anymore.

Dominic need to fix himself.  And Adaline need to work on herself.  Carrying on like everything is OK when she is the opposite is not healthy.

Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 14 2015 04:22 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Yep Adeline needs to move on kinda how Sasha did if Dom doesn't get the the memo its his loss & the other guys gain.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 08:42 pm

Title: Chapter 8

So I've been thinking it over (& reading other reviews because I'm loving others take on this) & I have to say that Addy should continue growing as a person because her infatuation with Dom is played out. Also, romantically speaking, Dom owes Addy nothing. They may seem like they'd be a great couple, & Addy is very sweet, kind, intelligent, & other positive adjectives, but sometimes if you don't feel it you don't feel it. You can't guilt someone into being in love with you. You can be the bestest person in the world and they can still not want you in that way. It sucks but you gotta suck it up, know or in Addy's case find her self-worth, and move on. I want her to continue to build her friendships and maybe build a good friendship with Murphy that starts with being honest about her feelings about Dominic. I don't want to see anymore broken hearts.

Still though, Dominic may be a good friend in private but with how he treats her publicly? That, to me, shows his true character. And that's making him seem nothing like the sweet man we knew and loved from Sasha & Dmiriti's story. He obviously hasn't ever cared about her friendship if he didn't even try to keep contact with her after high school honestly. To me, he felt sorry for her and nothing could be worse for Addy or Dominic than a friendship built on pity and infatuation. His actions show him to be shallow and fickle. And that's the most disappointing thing when he seemed to be the complete opposite before. 

Reviewer: reneicy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 8

She should leave Dominic in the dust and fast. As someone with a speech impediment I can tell you that people that are ashamed to be your friend in public are not your friends. I don't know if Adaline can forgive Dominic or not but it'll be hard, for me at least, to forgive Dominic for this. I'm interested to see how this all plays out though that totally rubbed me the wrong way. Dominic should know Adaline better than anyone & he still does shit like this. It tells me that he's not what Adaline needs & he's not mature enough to handle a relationship with her, romantic or not. 

Reviewer: reneicy Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 8

My vote is for murphy. Adaline needs to stand up for herself, she should have checked Audrey. Dominic is a pussy, whether she's his friend or not you have to put your girlfriend in check. I love Sasha and Dmitri.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Basically fully on board with what RedHobo and the second post from Penelope had to say.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2015 05:12 am



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