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Title: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

Loved the update! Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Date: January 24 2015 05:16 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Interesting start.

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Date: January 24 2015 05:10 am
Title: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

More...please

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Date: January 23 2015 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

What kind of women did Pops become involved?  No one noticed Ginger's stalkerish behavior hoverinf bu the window?  Why was she hanging  around?   Intersting, very interesting!!!!



Author's Response: Hi there. One of the women from Pop's past will be introduced in an upcoming chapter. There is a reason for Ginger's stalkerish...err "alertness". Also, this is my first attempt to write something longer than a short story and I'm realizing that based on the way my brain functions, I need an outline quick fast and in a hurry. So, it might be a while before I post again but I will post.

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Date: January 23 2015 02:00 pm
Title: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

That felt like a teaser.  Want more?  What regrets?  He has 2 daughters, can't wait to meet them.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and more is coming. I finally figured out that the number of pages typed in my word processor is much less when posted online. That darn 16 point font fooled me good!

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Date: January 23 2015 01:21 pm
Title: Chapter 2: Shop Talk

I like it.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm determined to improve my writing skills.

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Date: January 23 2015 10:09 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

You have me intreagued.  Looking forward to the next update.

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Date: January 18 2015 05:42 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Nice start, but it's too short



Author's Response: I agree that it's too short. I'll work on the length. Thanks for the feedback.

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Date: January 18 2015 12:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

This is a great start. By the way in this sentence “Maybe we can something out.” your missing a word.



Author's Response: Good eye. Thanks for bringing that to my attention.

 Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 01:25 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Hmmm, let's see what he wants for reimbursement.

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Date: January 17 2015 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Interesting start...looking forward to reading more. 

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Date: January 17 2015 07:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

I like it. I'm intrigued. Please continue.

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Date: January 17 2015 02:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

Nice start

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Date: January 17 2015 01:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

I look forward to seeing what happens next. I wonder what he was thinking.

 Reviewer: Missus James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2015 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

sounds interesting

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Date: January 17 2015 08:41 am
Title: Chapter 1: Fender Bender

I am intrigued so please continue!

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Date: January 17 2015 07:14 am


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