Loved the update! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 24 2015 05:16 am
Interesting start.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: January 24 2015 05:10 am
More...please
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2015 05:55 pm
What kind of women did Pops become involved? No one noticed Ginger's stalkerish behavior hoverinf bu the window? Why was she hanging around? Intersting, very interesting!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there. One of the women from Pop's past will be introduced in an upcoming chapter. There is a reason for Ginger's stalkerish...err "alertness". Also, this is my first attempt to write something longer than a short story and I'm realizing that based on the way my brain functions, I need an outline quick fast and in a hurry. So, it might be a while before I post again but I will post. Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 02:00 pm
That felt like a teaser. Want more? What regrets? He has 2 daughters, can't wait to meet them.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and more is coming. I finally figured out that the number of pages typed in my word processor is much less when posted online. That darn 16 point font fooled me good! Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 01:21 pm
I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm determined to improve my writing skills. Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2015 10:09 am
You have me intreagued. Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 05:42 pm
Nice start, but it's too short
Author's Response: I agree that it's too short. I'll work on the length. Thanks for the feedback. Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 12:50 pm
This is a great start. By the way in this sentence “Maybe we can something out.” your missing a word.
Author's Response: Good eye. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. Reviewer: AvidReader28 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2015 01:25 am
Hmmm, let's see what he wants for reimbursement.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 10:18 pm
Interesting start...looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 07:08 pm
I like it. I'm intrigued. Please continue.
Reviewer: hazelbazel92 Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 02:11 pm
Nice start
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 01:25 pm
I look forward to seeing what happens next. I wonder what he was thinking.
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 12:57 pm
sounds interesting
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 08:41 am
I am intrigued so please continue!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2015 07:14 am