Title: Chapter 9

Cynthia plreaae don't play games with Caleb's feelings.  Yes, he hurt you but you knowingly got involved with a drug adfict.  I don't beleive that she loved Robert. Robert was safe.  Robert wouldn't choose a drugs over her.  I hope this means that Cynthia is allowing Caleb all the way into life .  So good!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 11:19 am

Title: Chapter 8

Cynthia knows that she don't love Robert, she knows her heart belongs to Caleb. She needs to own up to her feeling for Caleb. I mean how long is she going to punish this man, he has been through enough. She better wake up before he walk out again.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2015 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Okay, baby girl is starting to frustrate me now.  Why is she still using Robert as an excuse to deny her feelings for Caleb?  Has she even had anymore contact with him since they broke up?  And wasn't she complaining about their relationship before Caleb came back into the picture?  A lot of the drama she's dealing with is self-inflicted.  Plus, she's being incredible selfish. Caleb went away to get clean and in the midst of that had to deal with the death of his dad, and his grieving mama.  Yeah he should have at least dropped her a letter or a postcard but it's been 5 years already.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 07:04 am

Title: Chapter 8

Cynthis you know that you ate still in live with Caleb and that Robert was just someone to do!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 05:05 am

Title: Chapter 5

Cynthis is getting on my nerves.  I understood where she was cominfrom the first 4 chapters but now it's like...ok, we get it. He messed up when he lost his father, had to take care of his mother AND stay clean in a different country. But now...stop complaning about it to everyone. If you love him, be with him and try ot rebuild the trust. If you love Robert more, be with him and have a simple, drama free relationship.

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2015 05:19 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Outstanding writing!!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 29 2015 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 7

She has to get her feeling in order before she can be with anyone. Good try Caleb didn't work but good try.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 7

I know the  Caleb hurt her damn Cynthia stop running from your feelings.  I don't beleive that she's in love with Robert, he's just safe.  Love is an,encompassing emotion as you can feel love for many people.  I think that you can truly be in love with one person.  Cynthia 's heart still belongs to Caleb but she's scared to take the chance on him again and not to mention still very angry. Quit trying to use Robert!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 11:19 am

Title: cast pics

If Cynthia is so 'deeply in love' with Robert, why isn't she trying to move heaven and earth to get him back.  I think she's just trying to convince herself that she's in love with Robert because she's afraid of giving her heart back to Caleb.  

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 6

I don't remotely like her friend Flo...she needs to make her own choices not what Flo thinks she should do.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 6

I think she should give him another chance. When they first got together he was a total mess, now it's like he has truly man up. I believe in second chances. GOOD JOB!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 11:41 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Lol I love Randal & his sister Karen. Caleb is thirsty for our girl & even though she's holding out she's giving in & going a little soft because she still loves him but making him work for it. Love it.

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 04:00 pm

Title: Chapter 6

That was funny! ! Randall is good big brother!!  Why is Cynthia hating on Caleb so much?   The man is recovering drug addict who lost his da and was trying to get himself together. Cut him some slack. Robert  role up with you because he knows that you can't be in love with him and Caleb at the same time. Wake up Cynthia! !TTeam Caleb! !

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 11:55 am

Title: Chapter 6

great update

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 10:50 am

Title: Chapter 5

Well you love who you love ,and i only see her love for caleb. I hope she gives him another chance.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 5

Robert is not the on for you Cynthia.  You can't be in love with more than one person because being in love is too big to be between three or people! Caleb do your thang!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 12:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

Brillant!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 05:51 am

Title: Chapter 4

Robert is gone, thank you so much. Didn't like them together to me they didn't fit.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 03:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

Great story

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19 2015 10:12 am

Title: cast pics

OMG this brings me back to the good ol' valentchamber days! Thanks for making a sequel.

Reviewer: LuKohana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 02:32 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Role reversal. I want them together. I want a HEA for them.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2015 12:16 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Stunning!!!!

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 11:12 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Cynthia is really stupid,  you are still in love with Caleb and it is wrong to use what's his name to keep Caeb away. Woman up Cynthia!! I love these characters!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:20 pm

Title: cast pics

Man i love the first story and this one, I hope she give him another chance. This time around hopefully he will stay clean and sober. GOOD JOB!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2015 09:19 pm

Title: cast pics

Great start!  I'll have to go back and read the first story.  It's clear that Cynthia still loves Caleb and hiding behind Robert wont change it. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Crystal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2015 06:39 pm



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