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Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

Awww man she is going to stay a human?!!! That sucks. Now that would have been great!!! Now on to this review...

 

His parents are beautiful. And soo welcoming. I don't blame her for being nervous. Knowing what his pack means to him, this is a big day. I'm glad that everything was going smooth with everyone. Awww Declan is soo shy its adorable. LOl. Haha they called her tiny. Naturally a good chunk of the population is going to be tiny to them but okay. LOl. 

Who is this chick messing up the mood?? I love how everyone was ready to attack her. Love it!! Now is she the chick that Caleb was having those nightmares and flashbacks about? The girl who is the cause of his past demons? Why won't anyone tell her. That has to suck. Soo much going on and you are completely in the dark. 

I think that she and Declan will become close. If allowed to at least. I think that she can help get him out of that shy timid state he seems to be in. Not sure how but I think she can. 

Wow soo that's what their connection can do. I definitely thought she was just being overdramatic. How does she learn how to control it like he does? I know she is going to choose Caleb but he needs to tell her everything. You can't expect her to make a honest choice when she doesn't have all the information. If you know that she is willing to give herself the short end of the stick to protect you and whoever is important to you then you need to let her know what's going on and what could be coming. It isn't right to leave her in the dark and just expect to her to accept everything about your life when you won't tell her everything about it. 

 

Update soon!!!!! 



Author's Response:

Lol, yes, Ava-Rain will stay human. Turning a human into a wolf goes against everything that The Council stands for, not to mention that there's no guarantee that Ava-Rain would even survive the change. Caleb would NEVER want to turn her. Ever. But I promise that although she'll remain human, there's a lot more to her character than we think.

I'm glad you liked the Brandts & the pack! It was a really big day for Ava-Rain & I think she was handling it pretty well until drama came knocking, literally. Angelie is somebody from Caleb & the pack's past & there's a HUGE reason why they were prepared to attack. She's definitely NOT the girl from his flashback & yet another secret that Caleb does not want to share with Ava-Rain.

I've got big plans for Ava-Rain & Declan & I think they'll both be able to help each other to find their own inner strength & confidence.

Ava-Rain & Caleb's connection is no joke! If Ava-Rain chooses to stay, she'll definitely be taking a HUGE leap into the unknown. So I think she'll definitely be asking herself during that hour if her need for the truth is more important than following her heart. She already knows and understands why it's so difficult for Caleb to share his secrets, but is she willing to trust him anyway & accept that secrets come with the territory? Either way, whichever choice she makes is going to have its pros and cons.

As always, thank you for reading & reviewing, KeiKei! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 09:50 pm

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

Again, so glad Ava-Rain has a spine! She's taking it to Caleb and speaking her mind. 

And I understand all of Caleb's reasons for not telling her stuff, but he needs to tell her anyway. 

Love that Caleb's parents (especially his mom) loves Ava-Rain!!

Declan...what can I say...he's my baby! And Rickon doesn't seem quite as bad this time around towards Ava-Rain. If I remember, he was kind of frosty before.

 

Wonderful!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, flikchick!

Totally agree! He may not want to tell her, but he most definitely needs to. But he's just so frustratingly stubborn which means his actions are ALWAYS going to be led by his belief that he's doing what's best.

I love Momma Brandt! Caleb's happiness is her happiness, so there's no doubt that she'll love & accept Ava-Rain.

LOL, the love for Declan gives me the feels! As for Rickon, my other favourite twin, I haven't changed his character at all, so his scenes with Ava-Rain remained the same.

Thanks for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 08:46 pm

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

I am going to need Caleb to man up and tell ava-rain about fake mate because he just pulled a truly fucked up trick. Telling her to choose when he hasn't given her full disclosure. I understand why he doesn't but I still want to smack him. Can I please give Declan a hug. The wonderful man needs to realize just how perfect he is. And thank you my friend for recommending me  I am truly honored and humbled by you and just so you know I didn't realize I was featured until you told me so I  bow down to to your awesomeness my dear. I still think Angelie should do the world that favor happy writing my friend



Author's Response:

LOL, sometimes I want to smack him, too! As for Declan, poor thing could probably use a hug. But JUST a hug! If I remember correctly, you wanted to 'screw him six different ways from Sunday', LOL!, so I can't have you tainting him!

No need to thank me because I love 'You Once Said' & I admire your story telling. So, thank YOU for sharing it with us. :)

As always, thank you so much for reading & for your review, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! And LOL @ you still wanting Angelie to eat Jennifer!!!!

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 11:58 am

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

Even though it was brief I so happy to so some Ava-Rain and Declan interaction. Glad to here that Rickon and Jennifer broke up, it was for the best. And as for me bieng in your head (I laughed so hard at that) It can't be helped I guess I've got a little yellow in me. It is the yellow that can read minds right. Great chapter can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

I absolutely LOVE writing Ava-Rain & Declan scenes, so I'm happy that you're happy.

LOL, you most definitely have a lot more than a little yellow in you, Zoleka! You're like a straight up pure blood!

Super glad that you enjoyed this chapter & I'll try to update soon. As always, thank you so much for reading & reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 04:53 am

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

Dang, this story is the best IR paranormal story! Your writing is intensely descriptive such that I feel like l feel the characters' emotions. You rock...



Author's Response:

WOW! That's a HUGE compliment! Thank you, jahchannah!

I just really want Alpha to be the best that it can be, & I often feel like I'm failing. But it's comments like these that truly motivate me to continue believing in this story & my ability to tell it. So, once again, thank you! Your support means a lot to me! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 04:43 am

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

Awesome sauce!!  Angelie jealous, malicious heifer who be used like chew toy.  Ava-Rain don't be stupid, you safest with Caleb and his pack. There is evil afoot in their and only love and goodness of this pack will prevail.  Team Caleb! Love me Declan!



Author's Response:

LOL! No love for Angelie?

As for Ava-Rain, lol, like honestly, where is she going to go? Is she forgetting that she was kicked out? Though, I guess we can't really blame her for wanting to leave, all things considered. But will she truly be able to walk away?

I love that Declan is such a fan favourite!

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! And, once again, THANK YOU times a gazillion for recommending Alpha! :)

 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 11:24 pm

Title: 8 - 'You are a stranger here, why have you come?'

It was my pleasure recommending a story that is just this damn good.

 

 



Author's Response:

And it meant more than you can imagine! Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 08:46 pm

Title: Cast

lovely chapter as usual! I understand Caleb but I'm with Ava on this one. in her shoes,I'd also get the feeling that I put all my trust in him while he's still hiding things. I want Ava to choose Caleb of course but at the same time, I want her to walk away just for the sake of the drama,lol. because no matter what, they will always find their way to each other. Caleb needs to learn to fully trust Ava and stop treating her as if she's his to command. They are mates and equals. He says he doesn't mind that she's human ,but in my eyes, he's treating her like that exactly because she is human . I doubt he'd have reacted that way had she been a werewolf but I understand that he's very protective of her and that can lead him to make choices based on what he perceives as best for her.

Really, I love this book and think its beautifully written. I love the contrasting personalities of Ava and Caleb. oh I love Declan as well! Heck, I love the entire pack and wished that one of them gets with Kasey, lol. but that's just my romantic hopelessness talking :)

Author's Response:

THANKS SO MUCH! Glad you enjoyed the chapter, marchbabe!

Caleb definitely needs to learn to trust Ava-Rain & trust in her ability to handle ALL of the truth, not just tidbits here & there. But he's just so darn stubborn! And you're totally right, if she was a wolf, he probably wouldn't have reacted the way he did. Unfortunately, he's been surrounded & governed by secrets his entire life in order to survive, so it probably won't come easy for him to share them, even with his mate. She may be human, but Ava-Rain is not as fragile as he thinks.

I love that you love it! Ava-Rain & Caleb are my babies & I'm so happy that you're enjoying their story. YAY for another Declan fan! As for Kasey, you're definitely not a hopeless romantic because I've got plans for her & you may or may not end up getting your wish! ;)

Thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to write this lovely review! I can only hope not to disappoint! :)

Reviewer: marchbabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 07:59 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

can we go ahead and have angelica or is it Angelina eat Jennifer please because we all know the bitch needs to die. My Declan needs to work out his issues with his brother or all hell is going to break loose. Can Caleb please get over his survivors guilt and no to answer your question I don't like the fake mate because he chose her because he was horny and wanted to get laid and decided not to wait on Luna to gift him with ava-rain. Caleb can let go of his jealousy because Ava-rain loves him  she even declared it and she going to do it again when she meets the pack and his parents. I hope she wears her clinical secret deodorant because if I was her I would be sweating like a whore in church just saying



Author's Response:

LMAO! I'M DEAD! AGAIN!

No, you did NOT just say that you want Jennifer eaten! LOL!

As for YOUR Declan, his issues with Rickon definitely need to be solved ASAP because Caleb is 'NOT ABOUT THAT LIFE'. As for 'she-who-shall-not-be-named', I PROMISE there's a reason why Caleb was drawn to her. A HUGE reason.

Next chapter is definitely going to be interesting when Ava-Rain meets the pack & Caleb's parents & you already know there will be some drama. LOL, 'sweating like a whore in church'!! My gosh, what am I going to do with you?

You're absolutely SLAYING me with these reviews, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! Thanks for reading! :)

p.s. CONGRATS on having 'You Once Said' featured!!!! LOVE that story!

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 08:48 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

I really like this book! It's well written with an original plot.  Since Caleb is heir of the four is he the ultimate leader that will unite the four as one?  

I figured the girl from Caleb's past was a former love but not his mate.  Maybe he thought he would not find his mate and started a relationship that seems to have fallen apart before Ava.  He needs to tell her about it at some point.  If she finds out any other way, problems may arise.  

What's up with Ava's awful Grandma?  I'd like to know more about her reasons for being so cold to Ava though we do have a bit of history.  I think that the lack of love from her Grandma helped Ava to accept Caleb as her mate.  She was happy to finally be really and truly wanted with the possiblity of being loved forever.   Okay, I have said enough but I so look forward to updates on this book and will follow to the end.  You rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's a VERY good question about Caleb. Being an heir of the four is going to prove to be a REALLY big deal & I've got HUGE plans for Caleb.

There are a few reasons as to why Caleb started a relationship with this particular girl from his past, reasons that Caleb himself may not even understand. At this point, telling Ava-Rain is the last thing on his mind, but we all know that secrets hidden in the dark with always come to light.

Couldn't agree with you more about Ava-Rain accepting Caleb being a result of her grandmother's lack of love. He's offering Ava-Rain all of the things that her grandmother never did. It was a huge risk on Ava-Rain's part, but what did she have to lose?

Thanks so much for your continued interest in this story, jahchannah, & I'm so happy that you're willing to follow me on this journey to the end! It really, REALLY means a lot to me! Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 11:52 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

So, as per usual, my attention is on Declan. And his relationship with his brother. At the heart of it, what is that all about? Twins are arguably the two closest human beings on the plant. Why do these two act like they hate each other so much? And why does Rickon appear to get so much enjoyment out of Declan's discomfort?

Caleb needs to learn to say the words I'm sorry...lol! He has a wife now, there will be more opportunities that require it. However, his brand of apology was sweet....hehehe.

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Ah, yes, the twins. Rickon & Declan definitely have a sibling rivalry thing going on, which, unfortunately, results in them bringing out the worst in each other. And that totally sucks because, as twins, they share a special bond, but rather than accept, protect & nurture it they tend to fight it & reject it. *sighs*. . .boys. . .

As for Caleb, LOL, I know, right? He's so stubborn! But I'm glad you enjoyed his version of an apology, and, like you said, there will be more opportunities that will require it, so he will definitely have to learn to suck it up and utter those two words, lol.

As always, flikchick, thank you kindly for reading & for taking the time to review! It means so much to me! :)

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 12:54 am

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

I have another question I forgot to ask in my previous review. Are the other groups of pure bloods or are the yellow the only pure bloods left? 



Author's Response:

Yes, ma'am! There are still pure bloods from each of the four elements in existence, but the one's that are invading the north happen to be heirs of the yellow (the element of Air).

Thanks so much for your question & I hope that helped clear some things up!

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 09:32 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

Oh sugar!!!! That was amazing. I'm glad that his pack accepted Ava-Rain. I'm sure they would have regardless but it's good that they openly accepted her. I wondered if Caleb had parents or if they were dead. I wonder how his parents are? Will they accept her. So the Council doesn't know that he is the heir of all the elements. Why would that be a bad thing? Maybe I need to go back and read that part about his history again. But I can't believe that they allow the Yellow or pure bloods to do that. I understand that some form of order needs to be maintained but to give them that power solely and without constrains or a watchful eye is a bit much. To exterminate an entire pack is crazy. He was pissed that she left the apartment? She isn't in a prison Caleb. LOl. But I guess with everything going on around her that she doesn't know about I guess I can understand. Now onto this conversation she had with her grandmother. I'm surprised that she even spoke to her again. I didn't think they would ever speak again. Honestly. And I just know that her friend being there was not a coincidence. Something is not right about that. Is a wolf? Working with the Yellow? Cheating on Rickon? Something isn't right but I hope she isn't trying to hurt Ava-Rain or Caleb and his pack. 

 

Update soon!!! 



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed this chapter! Caleb didn't think his pack would object, but he needed that confirmation anyway, mainly for reasons that have to do with what happened in the past. The Council is not aware of Caleb's existence & we'll eventually learn why him being an 'heir of the four' is a REALLY big deal in his world because up until this point, Caleb has yet to explain why that is. As for Caleb freaking out over Ava-Rain leaving, he was totally about to have a heart attack, wasn't he? Lol, but like you said, there's so much going on—unbeknownst to her—that he doesn't want to take any chances. The last time he left her, she got attacked by a wolf, so you can imagine why he wants to keep her locked up.

I think Ava-Rain's conversation with her Gladys was probably just her naive attempt to keep the lines of communication open, to let her know that she's okay, to make sure that she's okay. As for Jennifer, there is definitely something fishy about her sudden and unexpected appearance & you're definitely asking the right questions!

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, KeiKei! I absolutely love your perceptiveness! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 12:53 am

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

Question can a werewolf have more than one mate or was that girl that is haunting Caleb like a girlfriend and not his true mate, also here's my theory on Jennifer I think that the pure bloods are using her to spy on Caleb and his pack and her being rickon's girlfriend is just a way for her to get inside info, though whether or not she is aware of this I don't know. Like I always say keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

In my world, werewolves only have ONE true mate. The girl from Caleb's dream/memories was somebody really important to him & their relationship was something that may not be understood at first. Ava-Rain is Caleb's TRUE mate, but there is a reason why this other girl was so important to Caleb. As for your theory about Jennifer, OMG, I swear it's like your inside of my head! Lol, seriously, you may be on to something there. You're super, SUPER perceptive & I love that!

As always, thank you so very much for reading & for your awesome review, Zoleka!

p.s. Get out of my head! Lol. :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 05:43 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

Awww...,  Caleb is a gone he loves him some Ava Rain .  Ava - Rain loves her some Caleb. Jennifer's appearance made my spidey sense tingle.  AvAva - Rain you didn't disobey your best friend as you are a grown @$$ woman. Why are talking to your grandmother?  That old woman could care less about you. Kick her to curb and be happy with Caleb! Awesome sauce!!



Author's Response:

He's a total goner & so is she! Lol, if your spidey senses are tingling then they are definitely working because Jennifer is up to something for sure.

As always, thank you so much for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 12:08 pm

Title: 7 - 'Looking at all or nothing, babe, it's you & I. . .'

You are the bees knees, my dear.  I know I've said it before, but it bears repeating.  I LOVE this story.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much, Jaye Sims! And thank you kindly for reading & for your lovely review! :)

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Date: April 29 2015 04:56 am

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

Sooo he had a mate before? Are you allowed to have 2 mates? What happened to this other woman? Did she die or something. I want to know. I'm glad that she is accepting all of this. It has to be hard. 

Update soon



Author's Response:

There was somebody REALLY important in Caleb's life in the past & it's going to put a dent in Caleb & Ava-Rain's relationship for sure. Ava-Rain definitely took a big step by accepting Caleb and his world & hopefully she won't end up regretting her choice.

Thanks for reading & for your review, KeiKei! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:46 am

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

She decided to accept him!!! I'm excited to find out what happens next. I was just as intrigued as Ava-Rain learning about his history. I hope he tells her more. I want to know more that's for sure. So when he claims her will she be a warewolf too? Will she have all the elements like him? 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the history aspect of this story because I thoroughly enjoyed writing it. There are still so many things that Caleb hasn't told Ava-Rain & that may end up hurting their relationship when those things come to light. To answer your first question, I can assure you that Ava-Rain will REMAIN human. As for your second question, you'll definitelty have to stay tuned to find out.

Thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to review, KeiKei! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 02:21 am

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

Great the dead girlfriend is back. Why did you have to bring the dead girlfriend back.sigh just when they take a step forward you bring the fake mate up to screw with Caleb's head. This is why I like Declan he has no dead fake mate baggage so I can screw him six different ways from Sunday and he won't have survivors guilt. Lol please update soon my friend happy writing



Author's Response:

LOL!!!!!!!!!! I swear I just died reading this review!! LOL!! I take it you're not a fan of she-who-shall-not-be-named? You already know that I've got to keep Caleb and Ava-Rain on their toes somehow. As for you having your way with innocent, little Declan. . .LOL, I have absolutely no words. 'Survivors guilt'---> I'm DEAD! Oh, my gosh.

Thanks for reading and for this hilarious review! Happy writing to you, as well! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 02:25 pm

Title: 6 (1) - 'A nightingale in a golden cage. . .'

This one was good and steamy woah. I don't know what I am going to do with you the one weekend I go to the lake where I have no service is the weekend you decide to post not one but two chapters. Why would you do that to me but I am off to read the next chapter. Sidenote I am half way done with chapter15 for YOS and had a new idea for the next chapter of LAY. 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! LOL, it was totally my intention to post chapter six in its entirety, but it was super freaking long so I split it into two. Hope you had a fabulous weekend! And, YAY!! I'm totally excited for some updates on your stories! Let the creative juices flow!!

Thank you kindly for reading & reviewing, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 21 2015 02:08 pm

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

So it's the same just reposted ?



Author's Response:

Hi, RedMoon! Apart from some minor changes, Alpha is pretty much the same.

Thanks so much for reading it then & I hope you'll enjoy it the second time around! :)

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Date: April 21 2015 02:04 pm

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

i cant wait



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, minxie! I'm so glad you're enjoying Alpha thus far! :)

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Date: April 20 2015 10:17 am

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

GOOD JOB!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jacqua43! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Date: April 20 2015 12:50 am

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

You are a women on a mission aren't you. My gads I just love these two they are so adorable I'm so jealous of Ava-Rain right now but looking at here life she needs all the love she can get and thank god or luna she found Caleb. Like always great update btw love the quick updates can't wait for more



Author's Response:

LOL! Well, all of the support I've received since reposting this story has made me SUPER determined & motivated to keep these chapters coming. I love that you love Caleb & Ava-Rain because I absolutely love writing their story. LOL, I created Ava-Rain and I'm totally jealous of her, as well! Like, where's MY Caleb?

Thank you so very much for reading & for your reiew, Zoleka! And I'm so glad you're enjoying these quick updates because I'm always wondering if readers are getting sick of seeing this story on the 'Recent' page, lol. :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 09:27 pm

Title: 6 (2) - '. . .that's me locked inside reality's maze.'

Good story!  I am wondering to whom Caleb made his promise and look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Let's just say that the girl from Caleb's dream/memory was somebody REALLY important to him, and there's a HUGE reason why he's so determined to keep that memory buried.

Thanks for reading & for taking the time to review, jahchannah! :)

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Date: April 19 2015 08:35 pm



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