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Title: 18 - '. . .burn everything you love then burn the ashes.'

I love this story and I have missed it!!



Author's Response:

Sorry for making you wait so long for an update, but I'm so extremely happy that you're still loving Alpha!

As always, thanks so much for reading & reviewing, pmgayles! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2015 01:56 am

Title: Cast

haha understandable and its all good keep up the good work, and  ty :)



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for taking the time to even read my stories, li! And I promise I won't change their ratings to 'Members Only' ever again! Lol. :)

Reviewer: li Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 06 2015 02:08 am

Title: Cast

love this story so much  like tons... as well as moonise, but why did you make it for members only



Author's Response:

Hi, Li!!

WOW! Thank you so much! I'm so, so , SO happy that you're enjoying my stories! Seriously, that really, REALLY means a lot! As for Moonrise, OMG! I'm so sorry about that! I usually change my stories to 'Members Only' if I'm editing or adding minor changes to limit the amount of views while those changes are being made, which probably doesn't make any sense, lol. But I totally forgot to change it back! Again, I apologize for any inconvenience & I'll definitely get that fixed for you ASAP!! :)

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Date: August 04 2015 07:09 pm

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Oh and I forgot to mention about the POV for the next chapter that both Caleb's and Ava-Rain's perspectives would be awesome but also more work for you!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing your input, jahchannah! I appreciate it! :)

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Date: July 30 2015 07:37 pm

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Aww yay!!! I was right!! Does my happy dance. Hehe. Now that is completely jacked up, one best friend turns on you with the pure bloods. The other, is a damn hunter. Lol. Some crazy situation your in sweets. That still doesn't explain why the pure bloods were watching them? Or were they working together? I'm sure that's possible. That would mean that her best friends were working together too. I'm sure the next add will receal a whole bunch of things. Did they know she was mated to a wolf the whole time and became friends with her because of it? Is it even possible to know who someone is mated to before hand? I don't really care whose pov you use. I think Caleb would be good though, we already know Ava-Rain is going to be all emotional and stuff. Lol nothing new.

Update soon chica!!



Author's Response:

LOL, you were so right, KeiKei, & that makes you super awesome! :)

Ava-Rain just can't catch a break, can she? Kasey was the only thing Ava-Rain had left to keep her tethered to her 'her normal, human world', & now she doesn't. There's definitely A LOT more to why the pure bloods were watching the Hellands—A LOT of things going on 'behind the scenes'. Lol, I love that so many of you think the Hellands might be sketchy! It would definitely make things interesting if the Hellands were working with the pure bloods, wouldn't it? And wouldn't it just be absolutely horrible if not only Jennifer but Kasey were behind the attack on Ava-Rain? I don't think our poor girl would be able to handle that.

As for the Hellands, there was absolutely no way for them to know that Ava-Rain would be mated to a wolf before hand, but that doesn't mean that they didn't find out. . .Thanks for sharing your input over which POV to use! I wouldn't mind hearing from Caleb, because this revelation impacts him just as much as it impacts Ava-Rain. LOL @ Ava-Rain being emotional is nothing new because you're so right! Being in her 'head' is far too depressing & aggravating sometimes, lol.

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review!!

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Date: July 30 2015 04:59 pm

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Excellent as always! Strength made perfect in weakness...Ava-Rain and Caleb balance each other, challenge each other...strengthen each other...the one you love has the best ability to challenge you in the ways you may want to hide...complements...ain't always pretty with roses and butterflies...but often your soul mate is strong in an area where you are weak...I think Ava-Rain and Caleb are that for each other...balance out of chaos...not surprised Kasey and her family are hunters, just another loved one keeping our girl in the dark...maybe the Hellends are the reason the pure-bloods are after Ava-Rain..just wondering...you just keep stirring up the pot with more layers to this story...keeps me coming back...you rock!



Author's Response:

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review, jahchannah! So glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)

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Date: July 30 2015 02:56 pm

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

This chapter was worth the wait. I am bouncing up and down my couch right now like a child on a suger rush. I don't have much to say on the convo Caleb and Ava-Rain had in the car I think I'm still mulling that over. I am glad that the Hallends are okay and so exited that I got another theory right lol but I have one question, how could Caleb have not guessed that the Hallends were hunters the first time they met? or was his judgment clouded by Ava-Rain. And about the next chapter I really don't mind whom evers POV you do as long as I get my fix of Alpha I'm all good, lol.until next time 😀

Author's Response:

I'm so beyond happy that you enjoyed the chapter, Zoleka! LOL, girl, give yourself a pat on the back because you were so right about Kasey! I think I may need to step my game up now, lol!

As for Caleb not figuring out that the Hellands were hunters, he only met Kasey once and that was for, like, two minutes—hardly enough time for him to figure out she was a hunter. He literally only talked to her in order to find out about Ava-Rain. During their extremely brief interaction he did sense something 'off' about just how intensely protective Kasey was over his mate, but, like you said, his judgment was clouded by Ava-Rain; his mate was all that he was concerned about in that moment.

Lol, glad you don't care which POV to use, as long as you get your fix! LOVE that answer! As always, thanks for reading & for your lovely review! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 11:51 am

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Get the hell outta here!! Lol! That's a twist. This is going to be awkward.

I definitely need Ava-Rain's POV on this because this is her friend and clearly she doesn't know some things about her...lol!

Well done!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts on which POV to use for the next chapter, flikchick! Ava-Rain & Kasey are equally going to be pissed at each other for keeping secrets, so Ava-Rain's POV should make things interesting. Maybe we'll even see a darker side of Ava-Rain. . .

Thanks for reading & for your review! :)

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Date: July 30 2015 02:27 am

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

I want Ava-Rain's point of view because I see that she still stupid tendencies.  Kasey and het family are hunters?  Do they hunt all supernatural beings?  Ava-Rain Kasey is your friend anyway, Caleb and the rest of the pack are not safe so please stay away from your so-called friends. So good!!



Author's Response:

LOL I laughed so hard at 'stupid tendencies' because it's so true! Thanks for your input, pmgayles! In this world that I've created, werewolves are the only supernatural beings that will be introduced, so the hunters' only 'job' is to protect humans from the wolves.

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!! Super glad you enjoyed this chapter! :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 01:24 am

Title: 17 - 'cause I'm broken when I'm open, & I don't feel like I am strong enough.'

Hi my friend I love it when I am right. Lol but seriously I liked this chapter. Is ava rain concern for Kane her alpha female spidey sense kicking in? Ava Rain is going to flip shot on kasey and kasey is going to do the same to he for keeping secrets but that's life. I m glad that Caleb and Ava Rain are talking about their issues but I wish they weren't so quick to expect the negative and over looking the positive albeit given their background it is understood.  I am taking your advice and stepping back from yos. As for whose view I say ava rain because kasey is her best friend and the people she considers family so her pov is more important in this situation

 Just my thoughts happy writing my friend. Ps I need more Declan in my life so hop to it lol



Author's Response:

LOL! So glad you enjoyed this chapter, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! Ava-Rain & Kasey are most definitely going to be pissed for keeping secrets from each other, that's for sure! Thanks so much for your input in regards to which POV to use! I felt like either would work since Kasey & her family being hunters will have an impact on BOTH Caleb & Ava-Rain in different ways. I love your thoughts so thanks for sharing them! As for YOS, hopefully taking a step back works for you as much as it works for me!

As always, thanks for reading & for your review! As for your Declan, not yet sure when he'll make another appearance, but I hear your pleas & I'll try not to deprive you of him for too long! ;)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2015 12:49 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

Congratulations on the 1 year anniversary! Lol. I wonder whatbrhe pure bloods want with Kasey and her family. Maybe they are descendants of those people who watch wolves (name slips me right now), that might make sense. Look at Ava-Rain bringing out new powers of Caleb. Cool!!

Update soon



Author's Response:

LOL, THANK YOU!!! Still can't believe it's been two years!

There's definitely something suspicious about Kasey & the Hellands being in one of the pureblood's memories. Love the theory about them possibly being hunters circling around! Are we not buying that they're just plain, old boring humans? As for Caleb & Ava-Rain, can those two be any more perfect for each other? This might just be the beginning of the type of power that those two will bring out of each other.

Thank you so, so, so much for reading & reviewing, KeiKei! It's much appreciated! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2015 09:36 pm

Title: 15 - 'Do you want me for my body? Do you want me for my brain?'

Oh my.. she is going to let that girl into her head? I hope that nothing happens to her and she does come back from this. I would hate to see Caleb if she doesn't or something bad happens. I would hate to see the entire pack if something went wrong. It seems that they all have taken a liking to her. Angelie better get this right the first time and not hurt Ava-Rain in the process.



Author's Response:

LOL, what, no trust for poor, innocent & misunderstood Angelie? She's definitely crazy but, despite what she's done in the pack, I don't know if she's actually crazy enough to mess with her former alpha's TRUE mate. Or is she? Ava-Rain's about to take on a huge risk for the sake of the pack, so let's hope that she's comes out of this with her faculties intact!

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review, KeiKei! :)

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Date: July 15 2015 08:21 pm

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

OMG Yes! This chapter is everything! Finally they're finding power in each other. That lil speech that Caleb gave at the very end was ever so touching.

With that being said, of course there is still some things to iron out like... Caleb blaming himself or questioning himself after he dream walked and then Ava-Rain thinking she was useless or that she failed, but hey PROGRESSS

Also Caleb boo you couldn't dream walk to what's her name, emma because she wasn't your life mate. It's just that simple. We all know that yeh you can choose a mate, but a life mate, one that is destined for you is strong enough to withstand anything that comes with being your mate. LAwd do I need to come up on in there and teach some lessons. Today's class... Life Mates 101 and what that means. LOL 

 

Thanks for the update! 



Author's Response:

LOL, as always, your reviews are EVERYTHING, thincakes! LOL @ Life Mates 101!!

Caleb & Ava-Rain are much stronger together than they are individually, that's for sure. But there's still so much more to them that they have yet to discover. . .As for Emmy Grace, she's still going to be a dark cloud over our alpha pair's relationship for a bit because it's not going to be easy or quick for Caleb to get over his guilt over her death. She may not have been his true mate(I love that the general consensus by all the readers is that Caleb wasn't able to save her with the power of the four because she wasnt his true mate, by the way), but it doesn't change the fact that he wanted her to be his mate. But is that the real reason why he couldnt save her & is it really that simple?. . .

Thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to leave another awesome review! So, SO glad that you enjoyed the chapter! :)

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Date: July 11 2015 03:52 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

I think I have developed a sixth sense for this story, I this voice in my head that tells me to check if you have updated and Boom you have updated lol.whoow this chapter was intense Caleb and Ava-Rain literally became one, my mind is blown (excuse the pun). what happened between Ava-Rain and Caleb is a telltale sign that it's time for Caleb to let go of Emmy Grace, bad things happen to give way for better things to come/flourish. I hope that Kasey and her family are ok and I still think that they are hunters. Twelve20one you are amazing and your stories... Fantabulous. 



Author's Response:

LOL! You're like an Alpha whisperer, I love it!

This chapter was pretty intense & a major breakthrough in Caleb & Ava-Rain's relationship was revealed, which is pretty awesome! As much as you guys WANT Caleb to let go of Emmy Grace, lol, it's definitely not going to happen so soon or so easily (don't hate me!) But, OMG, you have absolutely no idea just how RIGHT you are about bad things happening to give way for better things to flourish! Again, this is the part where I freak out a little because I'm remembering that you're basically an heir of the yellow!! As for Kasey & her family, you were one of the first to offer up the theory about them being hunters & I'm glad to know you're still standing by that theory because I LOVE it! Next chapter, we'll see if you've been right all along or not.

As always, thank you so much for reading & for your amazing review, Zoleka! YOU are the amazing one & I can't thank you enough for supporting Alpha & I over the past two years! :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 11:25 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

Caleb was awesome except he wondered where the same voice that helped him save Ava-Rain was when he tried to save Emmy Grace. So she is still an obstacle between Caleb and Ava-Rain. The voice he heard to help Ava-Rain is because she is Luna's gift to Caleb, his true other half. Yet Caleb still hangs onto Emmy Grace, which is not good in the face of Ava-Rain's continued feelings of inadequacy. I wonder how they will conquer the ghost between them? Well here's another reason to keep reading!



Author's Response:

Caleb's always going to be the type of guy that when he feels, he feels deeply, no matter the emotion. And I love that about him. He's always going to feel guilty for not being able to protect & save Emmy Grace, so if that makes her an obstacle, then it will probably be one that might prove difficult for our Alpha pair to overcome easily or quickly. But they've both just learned that they're stronger together than they are individually, so conquering Emmy Grace's ghost may not be easy, but it can be done if they're willing to do it together. As long as Caleb stops believing that Emmy Grace is his burden to carry alone & Ava-Rain stops using Emmy Grace as an excuse to question or doubt her role in her mate's life/world.

Thanks so much for leaving yet another lovely review, jahchannah! I so appreciate it! :)

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Date: July 08 2015 02:50 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

It continues to be worth the wait!



Author's Response:

So excited to know that you're still enjoying Alpha, Drea! I was happy to have you as a reader the first time around & I'm even more happy to have you again!

Thank you so, SO much for reading & for your review! :)

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Date: July 08 2015 01:59 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

This chapter was fucking amazing woman you go girl. I love how through ava-rain s mental breakdown Caleb was able to mostly come to terms with being the heir of four and what it really means. Maybe now that voice he heard will make him reconsider the pedestal he placed fake mate on. Hmm the pureblood has a problem with kasey and her family that coupled with kaseys reaction to Caleb and her warning to ava-rain makes me think she is a hunter and Ava Rain is also very special but how special you have revealed yet. I still love angelie and this she rocked but not as much as my Declan. This chapter was from Caleb s pov and if I remember correctly the first time it was ava rains so that was a surprise but I still liked it and thank you for the shout out but the credit belongs to you because you my friend are an amazing writer and when you finish writing this I think you should try to get it published because it's that good. Please update soon and happy writing. And I am riding along your creation until the wheels fall off. Love you and this story



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you! I'm still not absolutely satisfied with this chapter, but I'm so beyond happy to know that you enjoyed it! Ava-Rain & Caleb are a true alpha pair & I so enjoyed showing that in this chapter. They strengthen & empower each other, and neither can reach their full potential without the other. As for Kasey, I'm soooo glad that you still remember her reaction to Caleb & her warning to Ava-Rain because next chapter is definitely going to explain why. And I LOVE your theory about her possibly being a hunter! LOL, I know you're never going to give up your love for Angelie & I hope you don't because I love her, too. First time around, this chapter was also in Caleb's POV, only it wasn't completed so only half of it was posted. Thank YOU for still sticking by me & this story for all these years! I LOVE my ride or die readers so freaking much! As for publishing, that is such a terrifying idea, lol, but I so appreciate you saying so. :)

As always, thank you so very much for reading & for your review, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace, & I'm sending ALL of that love back tenfold! Also, are you having any luck getting past your writer's block?

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2015 01:35 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

This story never fails to impress me. The whole Kasey thing is still iffy with me. maybe she's a Pureblood? Maybe she knew the Pureblood didn't like the idea of someone she knew being a wolf and decided to cut that person out of her life. Or maybe she is the objection of that Pureblood's affection in a creepy stalker way. Who knows? I just know that I can't wait for the next installment. Amazing work as always.



Author's Response:

So happy to know that you're still enjoying it, Valentine! There's definitely something up with Kasey & the Helland family, & a reason why they were in one of the wolf's memories. Absolutely LOVE your theories & the truth shall be revealed next chapter!

Thank you so much for reading & for your review!! :)

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Date: July 08 2015 01:30 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

Here's my theory on what's going down.  Kasey is the pure bloods mate, but she rejected him for whatever reason.  That or the Hellend's ARE the pure bloods.

Another amazing chapter! 

 



Author's Response:

Wow, I so LOVE your theories, Jaye Sims! There's a reason why Kasey & the Hellands were in one of the wolf's memories, that's for sure & we'll find out what it is in the next chapter!

Thanks so much for reading & for taking the time to review! Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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Date: July 08 2015 12:40 am

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

Caleb brought Ava-Rain back,  he dream walked.  Cool!!  I was happy for brief moment when Caleb was thinking that he would kill Angelie, then you destroyed me!!  Oh woe is me!!  I don't know what to think about the Kasey situation. Is Kasey innocent?  Where is Jennifer?  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

The power of the four finally awakened in Caleb! Isn't that super exciting? As for Kasey, we'll definitely learn more about her in the next chapter & if she's innocent or not. As for Jennifer, lol, who knows where she is, but she probably knows that it's in her best interest to lay low for a while after what she did.

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, pmgayles! So appreciate it! :)

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Date: July 07 2015 11:47 pm

Title: 16 - 'If this is to end in fire, then we should all burn together. . .'

You are amazing!  You are brilliant! Talk about a powerful ending to a cliffhanger, you hit it out of the park! That was the most amazing chapter of the best both supernatural and werewolf story I have ever read!  Ava-Rain is Caleb's strength just as he is hers.  Through Ava-Rain Caleb was finally able to wield the power of the 4 in perfect balance to revive Ava-Rain. Only his mate had the ability to push him to do what he needed for her and for himself.  Clearly only with and through Ava-Rain will Caleb be the Alpha he was meant to be. Caleb thought the power of the 4 brought only through destruction but only through destruction of the old can construction of the new begin.  There is a time to destroy and a time to build...Balance is key...Ava-Rain balances Caleb...this power is the real truth of mates/soulmates...I was sad to see that she thought she failed because as I watched Caleb save her, I knew she, too, was saving him and helping to rebuild him to be a powerful Alpha...so Caleb's response to Ava-Rain thinking she failed was perfect...unfortunately, I don't think she believes him...our poor girl will learn in time...as for you Twelv20One...you so rock...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, jahchannah! This chapter was one of the harder ones to write—I wasn't 100% satisfied with it, but had already re-written it so many times that I had to convince myself to stop—so for you to consider it the 'most amazing' chapter of Alpha thus far just totally blows my mind! Caleb & Ava-Rain really are a true alpha pair, & I loved that I finally got to 'show' that. Ava-Rain is the 'light' to Caleb's 'darkness', but he's also the 'light' to her 'darkness' & as the story & their relationship progresses, we'll definitely see how accurate that is. . .

As always, your reviews are so on point & I absolutely love & appreciate them! Thank you so very much for reading & I'm so happy to know that you enjoyed it! You rock even more! :)

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Date: July 07 2015 11:03 pm

Title: 15 - 'Do you want me for my body? Do you want me for my brain?'

Later late horribly late I know and I apologize but this chapter rocked. All I ask is you don't stop at the next chapter. I want to know what those memories are lol. The concern all of the pack showed for ava rain is sweet and angelie s concern for Caleb tells me something was up with fake mate and it was her jealousy that made her maul fake mate but something she saw with her yellow. And just so you know my loyalty to angelie has made realize I might be too hard on Jennifer maybe. Happy writing my friend. Ps as you can tell I hit another road block with yos it sucks really



Author's Response:

No need for apologies! I'm just super glad that you enjoyed the chapter, Jadedbylifesavedbygrace! So, you think Emmy Grace (fake mate, lol) may not have been so innocent after all? Maybe you're right. . . .or maybe you're wrong. . .I'm not telling! ;)

As always, thanks so much for reading & for your review! So sorry to hear about your writing troubles! Maybe taking a complete break from YOS will help? I find that if I take a step back & try not to think about my stories for a couple of days helps to get past road blocks. Sometimes I get far too caught up in what NEEDS to happen next rather than allow what WANTS to happen come naturally. And when that happens, I find it best to just 'walk away' for a bit to sort of 'clear my mind'. And, I kid you not, next thing I know, I'll be walking in a grocery story & then **BAM!**, inspiration hits! Girl, you're brilliant & beyond talented, so I'm absolutely positive that you'll get past your writer's block! Just know that I'll be waiting patiently for your next chapter, so take all the time you need! No rush! :)

Reviewer: Jadedbylifesavedbygrace Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 03:43 pm

Title: 15 - 'Do you want me for my body? Do you want me for my brain?'

Alpha Female! YES! Ava-Rain show them who is boss! 



Author's Response:

Our girl is finally stepping up & taking control, not just for the pack but for herself, as well. She's doing us proud, isn't she?

Thanks so much for reading & for your review, thincakes! I so appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02 2015 09:28 pm

Title: 15 - 'Do you want me for my body? Do you want me for my brain?'

Awesome as always.

I know Ava-Rain has the yellow in her...for sure.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading & for your review, Anonymous!! Really happy to know that you enjoyed it! As for Ava-Rain, you're aboslutely sure that she's not just a plain & boring human? Lol, love your theory! :)

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Date: July 02 2015 04:54 pm

Title: 15 - 'Do you want me for my body? Do you want me for my brain?'

Happy Canada day even though I'm not Canadian lol. Has it really been only 15 days wow they have been through so much in such a short span of time I can't believe that they have only been together for 15 days I'm shocked. I'm kinda glad that they decided to wait awhile till Caleb claims Ava-Rain, I don't know I kind of feel like sex kills the romance and I feel like the is no need to rush into things I mean they have only been together for 15 days lol I don't know I guess I'm old fashioned that way. Those lines about love and hate being the truest to of mate and that love without hate is an illusion of you killed me there you're a truly talented word smith. I hope that Ava-Rain doesn't die I was also wondering if the story of Emmy Graces death will come to light Angelie seems like a logical person and she genuinely cares for Caleb I wonder what she found out about Emmy Grace that prompted her actions. Eagerly awaiting your next update and I loved this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Lol, thank you!!!

I know, right? It seems like sooooo much longer. I legit surprised myself when I had to trail back & remind myself how long they've known/been together, lol. And, girl, I'm so with you about waiting! There is absolutely no need for these two to rush anything, which I'm sure might disappoint some readers, but Alpha just isn't that kind of story. They're sill learning about each other & there are about a thousand other things that are going on, so mating is not very high on their priority list—despite how much Ava-Rain's inner hussy may want it. As for Emmy Grace's death, it will come to light at some point, but not for a while. You're right; Angelie is an extremely logical person, so there's always a reason why she does what she does/did what she did.

As always, Zoleka, thank you so much for reading & for taking the time to write this super amazing review! I loved writing this chapter so I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 01 2015 11:44 pm



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