Title: Chapter 7

That one act of  Shyla comforting Matt changed their whole  relationship.  I still agree with Shyla on the baording school idea, those babies need love  and affection  not to be in school on another continent. So that Matt can back to not having any responsibilities.  This chapter may have short but it was the sugady!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update! take your time we will still be here. As for Matt and Shyla they needed that release, they need to stop fighting against eachother and fight together. I see love there. Good Job!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2015 01:39 pm

Title: Chapter 6

I really was slipping on this story. The characters are hilarious and the situation is interesting. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 08:18 am

Title: Chapter 6

Moooooore please !!!!!

this was so good. Don't take too long to update...

Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 07:49 am

Title: Chapter 6

Shy might be a little ticky, ticky, boom, but she was on point with her assessment of Matt's family.

btw, if and when they do get together, it seems it will be Explosive. Can.not.wait.

Great update, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2015 04:00 am

Title: Chapter 6

I just started reading this story and I'm hooked! 

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 03:42 pm

Title: Chapter 6

TEAM SHY! I think she was 110% right. They shouldn't be shipped off to boarding school! And I love how she basically stood her ground against three people at once. I hope she gives him the silent treatment! She left! Ooohhhh can't wait for more!! Loved it 

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Well done Shyla for giving Matts parents what for! I thought that was really out of order of them to do that behind her back. Hopefully (and I'm hoping) that she stands by her decision and tells them no. Also just because Matt went to 'Harrow' doesn't make him a God in the world, kids needs the freedom to grow, learn and express themselves hopefully he will see that and think differently.

Feel like I was just having a rant lol, but I did love this chapter and I'm looking forward to mor :-)

Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 10:24 am

Title: Chapter 6

Black folks don't put there children in boarding school especially if they come from a middle class background.  I agree with Shy's assessment of Matt parents.  Those children need love and affection not to he sent off to school on another continent. They just list their parents for crying out loud!  Don't like them or Matt right now! ! Charlie is a punk!  Where I'm the he'll wad Shy going?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 03:53 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow! What a blow up!! Hope they can recover from this disagreement!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 6

I hope Shy goes to see a lawyer about getting Matt released from his obligations.  Maybe then he will see what he will be missing with them out of his life.  Boarding school!  Yuck !  Her sister was praising Shy in heaven for sticking up for the kids.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 02:36 am

Title: Chapter 6

Wow!  What a powerul and emotional charged chapter.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2015 02:14 am

Title: Chapter 6

Love this story.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 6

"If you haven't judged my mother yet, you should." I love Shyla so much!

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Welcome back Hatty I have missed this story. Girl that emotional rollercoaster that shy was on during her period was priceless. Mr.Charlie got some nerve putting his hands on my girl, acting like a damn fool getting punked into asking someone for their hand in marriage knowing that the person don't love you IDIOT!. Now for matt and his parents, trying to give a voice to raising the kids, but don't physically want to raise the kids how dare they IDIOTS!.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 11:39 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Loving this story so far! She was so wrong in poop gate! Glad they called the truce!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2015 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 5

Very cut sweet update! However, did Shyla forget that it was her mother's plan to get her out of the house? Hmmm...does Momma think her daughter could fall for the brother-in-law, so she wants to prevent it? I'm curious about the jewel thiefs...my first conclusion was that it involved Shyla's parents, but I'm suspicious about people in general and knew that was a crazy idea. Can't wait for the next update. I'm loving the development between Shyla and Matt. Butt slap was hilarious. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 02:34 pm

Title: Chapter 5

The best line in this funny "booty booty booty rockin everywhere", I nearly fell out of my chair. That was too damn funny.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 11:57 pm

Title: Chapter 5

A much needed laugh to kick off the weekend. I'm liking how they're starting to be friendly. But I still want the differences to continue, because it's bound to be good for a good laugh. And since it can't be said enough, Shy is a mess. I like her view of life (I can so relate).

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 10:46 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Ok. Lmao!! I stopped reading to literally lol!! She slapped his ass!!! So innapropes!!! So gull darn hilarious!! Ok. Be back when I'm done.

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 08:44 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I think you are a visionary, I have never laugh so hard before. I'm hoping matt and shyla become more than friends. They say opposites attract, and they are sure opposites. Shyla mother is a piece of work trying to control things, please give her a life so she can stay out of theirs. GOOD JOB!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 17 2015 07:25 pm

Title: Chapter 4

oh my goodness. DEAD, I just died laughing. Shy is NUTS!!!

This is so much fun to read.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 11:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Great start. I love it already...

an update please !

Reviewer: siobhan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 11 2015 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

SMH I CANT TAKE YOU... matt's secret love for gospel choirs and the whole baptist church scene had me in tears. Love your writing looking forward to the next chapter maybe some more on shyla's ex 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Mr. Newton just earned my respect but Mrs. Newton working that my last nerve. Matt lighten up, please him him buy a sense of humor?  So loving the babies!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 09:21 pm



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