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Title: Chapter eight

Maya girl! you asked for it, now you are about to receive it. I hope Ayden don't go to hard on her because she is a newbie to what he has in store for her. And poor Kaya she needs to have a serious talk with Xavier about how he really feels about his ex and her. I don't think she should leave him alone, she can still protect her heart and see where this relationship is heading.  Girl!! no you didn't stop there, I want more please! thanks for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2016 06:12 pm

Title: Chapter seven

Please I need another chapter having withdrawals already!lol

 

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 12:07 am

Title: Chapter seven

Girl... that was Hott!!! Maya you better be glad he stopped when he did, because Ayden was going to break you!!. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 11:27 pm

Title: Chapter seven

Oh Maya why did you agree? Lol, but this was a good update. I can't wait for the next one, still a little bit worried about Ayden's intention with Maya.

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2016 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter five

yay! I'm glad that you're back..i've been hooked on this story and your other ones for a while now....this was a good update :) i loved it. I can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 06:59 am

Title: Chapter one

I cant help but love the obbsessive, possesive intense types. love love love this story and the way its written thus far ! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 11:35 pm

Title: Chapter five

PLEASE UPDATE I AM FEELING THIS STORY 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 03 2016 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter one

Bipolar disorder often run in families so I'm wondering if there is a twist further along in the story. Ayden has it too and combined with his obsession will make this a dark twisted fairytale 

Reviewer: saquir19 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 02:54 am

Title: Chapter five

Maya girl let this man take his time getting to know you. Build that friendship first and not being friends with benefits first.  Ayden is a keeper he just need some fine tuning. That was deep about him killing his father, but he had to protect his mother ( he's a good son ). Thanks for the update

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:48 pm

Title: Chapter five

Glad to see you are back.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 02:24 am

Title: Chapter four

you write very beautifully! But I can't decide if Ayden is a complete stalker or if he just really likes Maya, but he is definitely obsessed.

Reviewer: Anoynnn Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 07:39 pm

Title: Chapter four

Ooo what's going to happen next...I love that Ayden wants to take it slow and not rush into things with Maya, he doesnt want to scare her away. I can't wait for the update

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2015 02:38 am

Title: Chapter four

It's more to it than that. Although, sleeping with someone else's woman is enough, but it does take two. Now what else  is going on with Ayden besides him being a major hoe? Again, being a hoe is nothing light, but the way the story reads there seems to be something darker that Ayden is into and it's not just sleeping around or BDSM (I think that's the term, lol). Is Ayden a hit man, a drug dealer; at this point he is a complete mystery. Or maybe I am just reading more into it than I should be. Maybe all he does is the job he has everyday. Yeah right, he's doing something especially for him to always be telling Maya that he's no good for her, but obviously he does not have the strength to leave her alone and vice versa. Loved the update!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 03:59 pm

Title: Chapter four

Omg he is so weird lol and kinda creepy anyways good chapter I'm like a giddy little girl waiting to see how this relationship turns out

Reviewer: NiqueMo94 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 03:52 pm

Title: Chapter four

Maya, Ayden has proven himslef to a liar and a playa. He has played games with the attraction that he knows that you have foe him.  Stay away from hom. Maya is going to get hurt. Ayden maybe fine but I don't like him.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10 2015 11:16 am

Title: Chapter three

What's Aidens problem with Xaviar & how does they know one another.

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 02:56 am

Title: Chapter three

I can honestly say that I'm hooked....it's so good. I can't wait to see what's going to happen after bumping into Ayden..This was excellent, I can't wait for the update :)

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2015 01:57 am

Title: Chapter three

Totally hooked and intrigued......What the heck is the connect bt Ayden and Xavier?

More soon please!

Reviewer: Nicci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 11:05 pm

Title: Chapter three

I hate cliffhangers

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 06:50 pm

Title: Chapter three

WTF!!! I love this story so much. What was Xavier about to tell Maya? I have to know now. Now 'Mister I never felt that way before' came busting outside just when Xavier was about to spill the beans! I know Ayden did not mean to be jerky to Maya, but that's the way it came off. He probably could not believe how he felt about her, having just met her. I guess that could scare anyone if the feeling was strong enough and based on Ayden's thoughts he has not felt anything deep for girls he socialize with. So, I understand him a little. It is going to be interesting to see how Maya deals with him. She thinks, like I think most people would in her situation, that Ayden is hot and probably just wants to have a little fun and be done; moving on to the next one.

But based on how he is acting one can get two things from his actions. 1) He is just a jerk and probably wished he had not kissed her and cannot wait to drop her off and never see her again or 2) He is in unchartered territory and wants to ravish her but is scared of his super-charged feelings and doesn't want to show his in fear of running her away. So, he basically just shut down for a minute. Either way Maya is naively green and took that as #1. Which could be a possiblity, but why would he walk he to her front door and etc. Maya was not thinking clearly and her feelings were thoroughly hurt so her emotions were not leveled. 

Anyway, please update Very soon. I want to know Xavier's secret!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 05:16 pm

Title: Chapter three

Ret Wroo!!!  What the hell is Ayden's problem?  Maya is getting whiplash,  first you make out on your date then ig her while taking her home.  Now you're acting like a jealous ass when you see her talking to Xavier. Really??  Color me annoyed!!  More please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 11:24 am

Title: Chapter one

You still have two other stories to finish. Idk if I can get into this knowing that you will probably stop. It has been like two months since you UD this.

Reviewer: Storyteller247 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2015 05:20 am

Title: Chapter two

I think I like this one.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2015 06:13 am

Title: Chapter one

Love this story every time I read is always picture Ayden as Aaron Taylor Johnson I dunno with the curly long hair. Please update 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter two

Yay, a chapter 2. This was really good, I can't wait for the next chapter and find out how everything is going to play out.

Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2015 08:38 pm



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