Here is my problem: 1. I enjoyed the the story line: 2. I would like more but I know that won't happen: 3. 50% of the writers do not finish their stories on this wonderful site. I really enjoyed your one shot wonder.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2015 04:15 am
Why is this story marked as completed? You cannot end it there. I need more. More more more more
Reviewer: harriette14 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 08:36 pm
I'm Intrigued.
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 06:50 pm
Wow great got me intrigued on who Red really is why so secretive about his family. But to get his jacket back he agrees to tell Alexis everything. Please do write another
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 02:00 pm
I don't like the fact that he dined and daahed but he kind of sweet. Please give us a sequel I want to hear Dean's story.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 08:28 am
Well written. It flowed nicely. The ending was great, I did not expect the dine and dash. lol....I can't wait to hear his story, also the story of why the jacket is so important. I like that the male lead is not some rich dude coming to sweep the diner waitress off her feet. Quite refreshing. 10!
Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 05:21 am
That was so cute!! I can't believe that's it! You can't complete it on a cliff hanger! More please
Reviewer: bebe Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 04:33 am
Excellent read!!! I enjoyed the way the two connected with each other. If you choose not continue beyond Red's perspective. That's your choice, but if you want to continue that's your choice as well. I am intrigued by Red's situation and cannot wait to discover why he dined and ditched and why he's so attached to his dad's jacket. Maybe his father is deceased or left and that's the only thing he has of him, or maybe Red is lying about that too. either way, Great job!
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 04:24 am
Oh I hope there's more to come.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2015 03:39 am