Reviews For Fever
Title: Chapter 2

Great start!!!! I'm loving this story so far! Savannah is going to be trouble in the worst way. I am very excited for future updates.

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 12:19 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Where is this party?!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 05:21 am

Title: Chapter 2

What happen to the story?!! Why hasn't it been updated??? It was going so well. update soon thanks

Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 12:38 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Love the story but why do they keep saying "black friend"... Kinda awkward as far as the story goes 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 11:35 am

Title: Chapter 2

Love reading this story

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 2

what the hell woman?!! get the next chapters up! I'm hooked!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2015 12:37 am

Title: Chapter 2

Good update but I am lost.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Can you post chapter 3 already!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lalajanea Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Finally a threesome +erotic story. That was so hot girl, on point. You did very well writing the sex scene, it wasn't rushed. It was like reading one of the purchased threesome+ erotic novels off of the erotica website, but they're usually paranormal mates novels, which would explain the instant attraction. I would like to know more about Camilla character and the three guys and the relationship between each other. I'm liking how Adam looks, would it be nice if he was the more dominant one out of the three of them. Hope you update soon very very soon. 😉

Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 01:00 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I am completely hooked! Don't change a thing. Don't make them typical. I mean really how could they be normal this is threesome+ erotica. I am anxiously awaiting more!

Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 11:03 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh... A threesome love story between Camilla, Sawyer, and Adam is what I would love to see. But no homosexual relations between Sawyer and Adam. Can't stomach that.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 09:28 am

Title: Chapter 2

💦💧💦💦👍🏾💀💀💀💀 damnnnnnnn sawyer is hot af... and Adam emmmm I want me some Adam. Girly gave up the panties hella quick lmao. Superb update... Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow, she and Sawyer moved pretty fast seeing that they don't know each other! Hope she didn't bite off more than she can chew! Especially as he and his friends like to share women!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2015 01:36 am

Title: Chapter 2

Don't do it, Girl.  Unless you want them to use you like a desert saloon whore...at least make him/them work for to get it, again.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Damn girl you jump right into it, I like that. Savannah wrote a check her ass couldn't cash, black women don't play that shit. So I'm guessing Nate is the guy who put his hand down Camilla shorts. Adam is fine as hell with those beautiful blue eye's. Sawyer 9 inches enough said. So Sawyer said that they usually pick a girl and share her, maybe they all shared Savannah and she think's her pussy is gold and that they shouldn't want any other. My husband said that most white guy's secretly have fantasies and crushes on black women, but they don't know how to approach us. I told him he didn't have a problem approaching me back in the day. He said he did that's why he approached my brother's first.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Camilla needs to make Sawyer work for it. She literally didn't before. She should leave with her friends. I have a feeling Sawyer is not used to getting told no and I do not want to even think about Adam or Nate. I bet they are never told no. I'm sure Camilla will sleep with him again, but she should shut him down right now, not in a mean way, but in a 'that was fun, but I gotta go' way. If she does, it will be worth it, but I hope she doesn't take Sawyer lightly because he looks like the type that doesn't stop until he gets what he wants. It just gets old seeing women lose all their sense from the first screw (no matter how good) and then are stuck to the dudes side like glue. I hope Camilla's resistance is a little stronger than most. Great start and great update. I hope you udpate quickly all the time!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 11:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Just reading thru the reviews and getting a little irritated ...I have a question for some..Did you NOT read the Genre and Warnings BEFORE reading the book??? Nowhere did it say "romance" or "stereotypical fluff" it's a very sexual erotic book. It may not be everyone's cup of tea or maybe it's what some fantasize about (to each their own). But you need to respect the work, courage and effort. And to be CLEAR I am in no way down playing any triggers or condoning rape/sexual assault. I am just supporting an artist in their work.

Reviewer: Saylfo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Man, you shoulda put a Scotch Bonnet Pepper x Ghost Chili alert for us. That was hella hot and just became interesting for me with the sharing tangent.

Reviewer: linalin Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Firstly, the first chapter seemed off, please put some warning. However, the rest was hot!are you going to explain the relationship btw the boy? Why is savannah clingy?

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Make adam be star in the next chapter !HE seems smokey!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Coco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting, i was i thought she would have only two love interest. But instead, she has three?! Cool!

Reviewer: jaylovecake Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

And that right there is what I call sexual assault. Please put a rape/non consensual warning. It's a trigger.

Reviewer: Tay9 Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I'm guessing all three friends will share her...loved the description of Adam...seems like the calm and collected one

Wanted a lot more from this chapter, wasn't really digging the impromptu sex with Sawyer before a proper introduction to the other two guys. So hopefully we'll go full circle in the next and have a meeting of all four characters. Great work so far.

Reviewer: lannasage Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Can you post the third chapter already!

Reviewer: nikko Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Gaaah, that was hot ! continue please!

Reviewer: lala Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2015 08:34 pm



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