Crap, Reagan is in danger. I feel so bad for Chris, but his one is coming!! Why was this chapter so search?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 18 2015 02:16 am
oh poor chris - it sucks that the girl he likes he destined for someone else. thanks for the update - look forward to more!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2015 08:32 am
Great update I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2015 11:24 pm
You got me with one, now that I've read that I'm like duh,! Awesome sauce!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2015 08:54 pm
great update - thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews guys! Postive and Negative (as long as it is constructive haha) is always welcomed and well received. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 08 2015 07:17 am
Dante, laid his claim and Reagan don't know what I hit her. Scrumptious!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2015 02:49 pm
did not see that coming - thought for sure that she and Chris might be it. wonder how chris is going to react now that Reagan is Dante's...?
intrigued and look forward to the next update - thank you!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2015 07:20 am
Wow, didn't see that coming I thought she was going to be Chris's mate. This is about to get very interesting, being as though Dante don't like humans and come to find out his mate is a human. Can't wait for the next update!.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 05 2015 11:10 pm
Interesting can't wait for more.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 28 2015 07:37 pm
The De Luca's have telepathic abilities and turn into house cat's? Why not Panther ot a lion? What exactly were they eating? Why are they already against meeting Chris' girl? They haven't even met her yet, so what's the deal ? What is the De Luca's relationship with the Moosi? More please?!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2015 10:10 am
Are they cat people? Wiccan's?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2015 09:57 am
Your story is really interesting. I'm eager to discover Enzo's past and see Reagan's reaction when Chris will reveal their true nature. I love stories with native american characters, there's still so much to discover about their traditions ! Thanks for sharing ! On another note, I absolutely love Reagan free spirited personality.
Reviewer: Peanut Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2015 09:29 am
love Reagan - her inner thoughts are funny. thanks for the double update!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2015 08:19 am
Definitely needs a lot of work. Way to many descriptive words and run on sentences. It was distracting. However I feel like the premise is pretty decent. I'm definitely going to keep reading to see how this turns out. Good luck on the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Jacqua43 - There isn't a "Moosi Tribe", but I did use the Crow Creek Sioux Tribe for my muse. I didn't want to use a real tribe and offend anyone - so I stuck with a fictional tribe.
And thanks Anon for the critique, I'll try to work on those run ons!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 08:28 pm
good start! moooore please!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 09:28 am
Nice start. Give us more
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 01:44 am
Wow, more please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 01:38 am
My interest is pique I'm 1/2 Navajo. I have never heard of the Crow Creek Moosi Tribe, I know about the Crow Creek Sioux Tribe of South Dakota. I'm liking this story already.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2015 01:35 am