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Title: Chapter one

Girl, this sounds like trouble.... 

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 07:41 am
Title: Chapter one

Oooo I'm so excited for this....I don't want Liam to get his heart broken but Matt sounds alluring...I don't know which one to pick, I know it's going to be difficult for Faith...I can't wait to see how this is going to play out :)

 Reviewer: cottoncandy_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2015 01:21 am
Title: Chapter one

hmmmm very interesting start. What's the deal with these two brothers. How is Liam's brother Matt Dark & how does she know this. Want more please.

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 08:15 pm
Title: Chapter one

Interesting, but she needs to go catch some self-esteem with a quickness. Only dead people have dull brown eyes. And if she can't see what her fiancé sees, well, that won't end well.

Nothing wrong with not going to college, or being a bartender. Still, I would be curious to know what exactly brought the two of them together and keeps em together. Except for fingers up butts, what do they talk about? Do they share a common interest? Hunting? Painting by numbers? Raising rare dog breeds?

 

Are you going to be doing a threesome kinda story? Or will she be cheating? 

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 09:56 am
Title: Chapter one

I think this is going to be good.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2015 12:42 am
Title: Chapter one

This is gonna be so good! I can't wait to see what happens!! 

 Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 04:51 pm
Title: Chapter one

Matt is hot!!  This story is a two-fer, as two two hot men!  Yummy!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 03:14 pm
Title: Chapter one

OMG!! I hate situations like this. Liam seems like a sweetheart. Matt probably needs a sweetheart. Faith keep it together. Are Liam and Faith in love with each other? It seems as though they like each other of course; they are engaged, but Faith's attraction to Matt seemed to be instant. OMG, someone is going to get super hurt.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 03:05 pm
Title: Chapter one

Wow! That's a great start. Ihope you continue.

 Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 01:39 pm
Title: Chapter one

Yes!yes!yes! This is my type of story! I can't understand why it doesn't have a million reviews yet! I'm already smitten! Please keep updating!

 Reviewer: lwxie Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 12:48 pm
Title: Chapter one

great start...! it's going to be interesting to see how the story goes - look forward to more!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2015 12:40 pm


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