Reviews For The Human Story
Title: Let me spell it for you

Daniel is active. I love it! So, is this about the depiction on the door? Oh, and your vocabulary is entertaining.



Author's Response:

I like that about her too. You are right! It does center around the depiction, yes. Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:06 am

Title: Let me spell it for you

I can be pretty clueless when it comes to spotting clues, so now I really want to know what is going to happen.

 

What I like most about Daniels is that even though she is 38, she's like a society rebel. She's doing things her own way, she's adventurous, she hasn't gone the accepted route of going uni, 9-5 job, getting married, having kids and all that.

 

She is her own woman and powerful and I sense a little vulnerability too which I have a feelign I might see in future chapters.

Looking forward to the next chap as always.(By the way I was the one that wrote your first comment, I just couldnt be bothered to log in lol)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

It's nice to have a name, thank you Caterina! I love the same thing about Daniel. And you are right, you will see more of her vulnerability later. As to not spotting clues. It is okay. Things will become clearer as we go. Hopefully I'll weave the story correctly. Thank you for reading and for the lovely comments.

Until next time! ;)

Reviewer: Caterina Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2015 06:32 pm

Title: Let me spell it for you

I appreciate authors who do intensive research, it shows a true  love for your cradt.  I love the authenticity of your writing because of the research.  Daniel is going to fall in love with Okuz.  She seems to feel connection to this land and it's people.  Why doesn't she have her own camera or a smartphone?   She has traveled extensively in her life but doesn't own a camera? I like Kurt already!!



Author's Response:

Pmgayles you make an excellent point about the camera. Hmmm, we will assume that because it's a photographers precessional quality camera, it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.

Thank you for your acknowledgements, I really appreciate them. I hope you continue to enjoy the story! And keep calling me out too. ;)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2015 12:05 pm



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