Reviews For The Human Story
Title: Five hundred Lyra

Voda is cute. I like the way Daniel and Kurt interact. Your throwing us crumbs.



Author's Response:

But Tara, don't you like the build up?^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:20 am

Title: Five hundred Lyra

Loved the update! Wonder why Kurt drew her into his life?

Author's Response:

I appreciate you letting me know you liked it. As to Kurt, I'm not quite sure he knows himself at this point. Thanks for taking the time baha! ^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 07 2015 02:28 am

Title: Five hundred Lyra

I really like this! So interesting! I can't wait to read more soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment Rosie, I'm glad you are enjoying it thus far. ^^

Reviewer: Rosie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 11:16 pm

Title: Five hundred Lyra

Daniel is kind of ride, the doesn't like being called Kurt so stop it!! You could'very asked him if he minded.  Voda and Mir are funny, I like those two as well.  It's dark out, people with a brain in their head don't ride a bike in the dark.  I am annoyed with Daneil, Kurt has been nothing but kind to you, put you are all attitudinal!!  Please let get back to her domicile in one peace!!  Is this going to be a paranormal story?

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you feel so strongly about the story. I'm also excited to see you have become invested in the characters. Daniel and Kurt definitely have an unusual relationship, but they don't seem to mind. As to riding her bicycle at night...you've never done that? I highly recommend it. Just make sure there are some lights around. :)

to answer your last question, yes, the story will introduce more paranormal aspects as we go. Thanks for reading pmgayles!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2015 10:59 pm



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