Reviews For The Human Story
Title: Faza

What goes on here? Intriguing. Faza is suspect. Loved the dream, so very surreal just like they can be, though there was more to this one I think.



Author's Response:

He very much is at this point, yes. The dream sequences are fun to write. Thank you for ou!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 03:29 am

Title: Faza

Love this story so far! Faza seems mysterious. Wonder what's the connection between Faza and the family? Is he trying to set up Daniel with Kurt? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

There is indeed a connection there. Give it a few updates baha. Thanks for continuing to read the story! ;)

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2015 01:21 am

Title: Faza

Alrighty then!!  That dream was crazy or was it a memory given to her by the shared connection with Kurtirici??  I don't think that will be leaving aa she will marry Tawny ans the family from Adonia.  Awesome sauce!!!



Author's Response:

I think your mind is moving in the right direction with question about the connection between Daniel and Kurt. Bravo!! The dream sequence was a mother to write so I'm pumping air that you liked it.

Thanks Ms gayles! ^^

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2015 11:22 am



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