Reviews For Temptation
Title: Scream Queen part 1

Why doesn't she like him? He gave her what she wanted after all.

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2015 06:09 pm

Title: Relax

Wow! That's one way to get over a nightmare

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 21 2015 05:47 pm

Title: Scream Queen part 1

I hope that you are doing better.  I like Demetri and Raj can't stand the rest of them.  I lost all respect for Iren after the chapter you wrote  how she became a succubus.  Gina is going to die, won't miss her either.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2015 11:52 am

Title: Relax

Iren you are really stupid,  she lost the of parents for besuty. Her soul was lost, was that trade worth it?  Victoria is a bittet bitch!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2015 11:48 am

Title: The Memory

Oh wow. It really want anything special. Her fault that she got in her feelings

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 02:46 am

Title: Exes and Woes

Wow.. So she dated his sister. Now that's awkward as hell

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 02:38 am

Title: Strange love

She meeting the sister!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 02:32 am

Title: The Memory

OooHhhh I need More this was such a HOT chapter.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 10:51 pm

Title: Exes and Woes

Dang ! Great update ... More more more. Please:)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 03:29 am

Title: Exes and Woes

WTF?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 10:59 am

Title: Strange love

I like this story. I like everyone's personality... especially Iren's.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 05:08 am

Title: Strange love

Please keep it coming. Great chapter. Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you, updates coming soon!

Reviewer: avidreader Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 02 2015 08:26 am

Title: Strange love

I am glad that she didn't kill that guy.  Don't like Vixtoria at all!  Rak is cute but he doesn't stand a chance with Iren.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 10:51 am

Title: Party

these are some nice looking guys. Lol. that dream though!! Girl you got it bad, a dream is makiing you damn near cum on yourself. LOl. i know the sex better be amazballs!!

Update soon



Author's Response:

LOL I'll work on the sex...:D

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 04:02 am

Title: Who's who

i like them!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 03:51 am

Title: Party

Siraj is bae. More of him please. :)

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 03:27 am

Title: Party

Love the update!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 03:26 am

Title: Who's who

Great cast.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 02:48 am

Title: Party

Sexy and Cute Update. More please :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 02:41 am

Title: I'm a succubus

Me likey! Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 02:36 am

Title: Party

Caleb and Raj are hotties!!!  Hopping in and out dreams is cool,  but what us the significance of her being in D's dream?  Iren is obviously attracted to D but she can't feed off of him.  Raj is hot!!! This about to get sexier!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 11:38 am

Title: Who's who

David Gandy as Dimetri eould be so much hotter. The rest of the cast is cool.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 12:07 pm

Title: The meeting

Wow. A bar where supernatural people go. Lol. Interesting.

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 09:42 pm

Title: I'm a succubus

Holy crap!!! That's what he gets, having sex with students. How vulgar.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 09:36 pm

Title: The meeting

I take it that Iren knows nothing about vampires?  He's undead so therefore she can't feed off his soul or energy.  I wonder is this a supernaturals only club? Thanks for the quick update.  I am also wondering if Demetri was a made or born vampire? 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 11:04 am



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