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Title: Motive

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Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 09:58 pm

Title: Motive

Kiko, Kiko, Kiko.....must you watch a subtitled version of "He's just not that into you" and did you really think after he informed you that he couldn't provide the affection and love you were looking for that touching him without his permission would somehow endear him to you.  Do you think once you put it on him he will bow down and worship at your feet....did you forget who he is...Bish you'll be the one bowing down.  Now you have been kicked out and any affection he did feel for you just went up in flames hibachi style.  If she would have showed some heart and not been a puppet to his mother he would've had more respect for her and she may have garnered his true affection but she behaved like a pawn and therefore got kicked off the board, now he has to checkmate his momma and get his queen.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 01:43 am

Title: Motive

Wow! Kiko is acting real thirsty( as my kids would say) isn't she. Kiko needs to realize after being with someone for 10 years and he is showing you no kind of affection then it's not real boo!, there's nothing she can do his heart belongs to someone else. Hiroto better go get his women. Thanks for the update D&L



Author's Response:

LOL! Yes she is drinking from the super thirsty can't get a clue well. She acting PARCHED jacqua43 lol! PARCHHHHED. Kiko is a woman who is... she's clearly defined by her culture and of her family. And the decisions she makes (not smart or wise or respectful really) are influenced by these things. *sigh* Kiko is a hot messsss. HOT ASS MESS. Yes Roto to the rescueeee! He need to book that flight asap lol. You're welcome! <3 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 03:45 pm

Title: Motive

Very update...please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you!! <3

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 03:09 pm

Title: Motive

DL why did you decide to add another daughter, Rae only mentioned brothers  in the first book?  



Author's Response:

!!!! OOH good question!!!!! I did mention sisters in the first book but it was very vague AND I didn't give no specifics like I did with Tre! <3 I added Amee because I wanted a sisterly presence for Rae when she got home! (And other reasons ;D) It would only be natural once being around her family again.<3 :) <3 Thank you for the awesome question!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 12:56 pm

Title: Motive

This chapter was the to my reader's soul, I feel better now Kiko has been checked! Kiko has been written, read, reread and then erased!!!  Roto, the man has finally made an appearance and he looks good!  Now solidify your plans to leave Japan as the only there for you is Tobu, with his fine self.  Why did bring the trick with him to America especially after she sexally assaulted him his sleep??  From now on she will known as either Hoa or Hoko.  I can't stand that heifer, she makes my teeth itch, my left twitch and my right arm spasm as reach out and choke her little @$$!!!    

DL this story contains many of the characters that are on my list of my reviled characters, Hoa, Emi ( I'm a jail house bitch), Roto's donors, Kwa.  Hell, I ain't  too thrilled with Rae'showing family, sending her away but they didn't send their other daughter away?  That sugady was rank!! Nope can't stand them either. Me thinks that Rae forgave them not knowing the real story. I want Karma visited upon all those who have wronged and continue wrong our Rae and Roto.

Tobu should be rewarded for his continuous loyalty to Roto inspite of his stupidity of the last 10 years.  This is some good sugady!!



Author's Response:

I HAVE LAUGHED AND DIED. LOL. I agree on Tobu (both being fine as hell AND deserving to be rewarded ;D) Andddd on many other aspects of your comment! haha. The questions you have shall be answered hehe. <3 HOAAAAA I CANNOTTTTTT. BWAHAHA YOU STILL AIN'T FORGOT EMI BWAHAHAHAHA I CANNOT MS. GAYLESSSS STOP ITTTT. <3 <3 I love you!! WOOSAAAAAH

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 12:49 pm



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