Reviews For Transcendence
Title: Cocoon

Rae is in complete denial about her feelings for Roto.  The amount of anger that she feels alone indicates a deep love.  It was wrong to use Kwa, because his ass is obviously cray cray and Tre will have to beat his ass.  Hoa is working my last nerve, you lived with Hiroto for ten years and still think that he likes  your dumb ass. Why did he sleep in the same bed as Hoa?  Why would Hoa stay with a man who obviously can't stand her?  His every action or lack thereof showed his distain. That child lived in her own dream world, I am glad that Hiroto woke her ass up!  Rae's parents, make my teeth itch!! I can't  stand her father or mother is a bitch!!  When will the real reason they sent her away be revealed?  I have the feeling that the situation had something to do with Rae specifically. Like that man that pimped her out as a child is involved somehow.  I think the truth of that situation will force her to embrace her feelings for Roto.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 12:55 pm

Title: Cocoon

Such a good chapter.  I like the part mentioning losing her faith, that was great. Historic needs to earn Rae' s love and I think he knows that and is willing to do whatever.  Kwasame is such a creep, ugh. Great update!!!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 14 2015 03:43 pm

Title: Cocoon

They are destined to be together. Thanks for all the updates D&L.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 01:50 pm

Title: Cocoon

Again, a fantastic chapter

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 12:58 pm

Title: Cocoon

Why is she so shocked by the fact that Roto spent ten years with a woman that he didn't love?  That engagement wasn't about love but his parents evil manipulativeness.  Roto you have a lot to make up for and you must atone for the pain you've caused Rae.  You abandoned her just like everyone else in het life, yep it will be a long road.  

Roto told Hoa the reason for their "relationship", so why does she go off on him in that teaser in Accordance?  I have been wondering about that since the chapter entitled Leeway.  

Excellent DL!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 11:08 am

Title: Cocoon

I promise you're the only author who comes back to update her stories. You keep me sane. Thank the Lord for you <3

Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 04:54 am

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