Reviews For Transcendence
Title: Wading

Whoa.....this is crazy. It makes me sad and mad to know that stuff like this really happens. I hope that in the coming chapters, you write about how Rae got away from these psycho pedophiles, how she ended up being adopted, and what her adoptive parents real relationship is with this Peter guy that kidnapped and held Rae as his sex slave. I know that supposedly they sent her Japan so that he could then take her, but there has to be more to the sotry than that, like how he found out about Rae's whereabouts in the first place and whether or not he threatened her adoptive parents (what were the conversations between them like?). It was also mentioned that at one point, Rae was pregnant. That's something that HAS TO BE addressed later. One thing that I'll say about this story is that it's nowhere near being boring! lol



Author's Response:

Hi! <3 Thank you for reviewing! I definitely agree with you on the Rae being pregnant thing! All of what you mention will be brought up in due time :D I appreciate it, glad it's entertainin lol.

Reviewer: valent-c. reader-grl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 03:52 pm

Title: Wading

perfect 10 !!!!!



Author's Response:

Hehehe thank you Ms J! I missed your reviews! <3 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 07:46 pm

Title: Wading

Wow!  My heart beelds for Rae vi can't understand how anyone would ever want to hurt any child in that way! 😤😡😪😭



Author's Response:

Absolutely!! It makes my skin crawl and my heart break! 😡😡

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2016 12:34 am

Title: Wading

That was difficult to read, but I wanted to know Rae's entire story. I haven't been able to access you gofundme page. Could you check the link? I think if you asked your readers to make a donation of the cost of a romance novel, two, or more if they could that would be very helpful. Almost like funding for your work. You are a strong writer. Keep pushing forward. HumorMe.



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am Rae's story had to be told without a doubt! :) Yes I can definitely check the link for you!!! Thank you so much for your encouragement and suggestion! To be honest, I wouldn't even know where to start in asking prices for my work(s) :) It's something I am trying to decide upon as I am considering going into freelancing :) Thank you much! It is a wonderful idea, one I soon hope to put to action! God bless HumorMe! <3 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 10:43 pm

Title: Wading

As heartbreaking as it is, I do hope that you continnue to write about this part of Ebere's past (honestly, I'm still just a little bit confused about some stuff regarding her past even though I've actually reread some chapters, so your flashbacks and her discussions with her psychiatrist (getting info directly from Ebere) are helping to clear some things up for me). This is a great story, and this chapter was realistic and well-written!



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! If there are any questions please ask! I am glad that Rae's side of the story can be shared! :) Take care! :D

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 08:10 pm

Title: Wading

No child should ever have siffer hoe Rae did.  This chapter hurt my heart, Rae has suffered do much the fact that she allowed Roto in at all is amazing.  She is healing and is ready to put her adoptive family where they should be in her rearview window.  So good!!



Author's Response:

!!!!! YES MA'AM! The fact that Roto was allowed to even come into her life says something MAJOR. Yes our Rae is healing finally from years and years of pain and torture. I am so glad for that!! When she come back, she gon be ready to deal with her adoptive family for sure!! <3 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 07:50 pm

Title: Wading

Wonderful, but understanding rebirth of person body, soul and self-worth, you have given many of us an outlet...Thank you for writing this chapter...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bredreaway!!!!! I am so happy for your review!! Thank YOU for reading, for your love and support! <3

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2016 07:47 pm



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