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Title: Step (One At A Time)

Great update

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 24 2016 01:05 am
Title: Step (One At A Time)

Daniel is just like some men who think a woman who has a position of power recieved it lying on her back. Daniel was out of line! and Rossi should have been the one who set him in his place, because he knew what Daniel was talking about and he knew that it wasn't true. I loved how Roto stood up for his woman, he was the only real man in the room. I can't wait to see how this friendship blossom more. Thanks for the update D&L.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 08:18 pm
Title: Step (One At A Time)

Wonderful update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 06:49 pm
Title: Step (One At A Time)

Rae and Roto's story is quite beautifully written...two damaged souls that are healing but still need each other to truly be whole...it's so good to see a love story where a black woman is valued for who she truly is...you have taken such time to carve out the characters of Rae and Roto and as a result this story is like a spiritual journey for them both...love it...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 04:36 pm
Title: Step (One At A Time)

Yes, Rae is finally going to give Roto a real chance!!  Has Roto dealt with Hoa yet?  I know that you would write about it in the present and not in flashback.  I want to read the scene and picture it in my head when Roto sends Hoa packing.  I can't wait to see her wish washy, punk tail crying and whining saying but I love you Hiro!!  I want him to finally say, " but I don't love you and I never have. "  Those words leaving his mouth would make me so happy, especially if you use the 7up line, you know never had my love never will. Yippee skippy, Rodney Allen Rippy!!!!

DarkandLovely you have made my Wednesday morning!!  Daniel Logan is punk and Roto should beat him like he stole his dollar.  Thank you for this SMARVELOUS update!!  (SMARVELOUS is smart and marvelous )

 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 02:03 pm
Title: Step (One At A Time)

Wonderful update

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Date: March 23 2016 12:13 pm


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