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Title: Explosion

I don't like Mr. Rossi he's possessive, cocky and very annoying. Hiroto did right by not fighting him, let a group of your peers see how unstable he is. Rae needs to take her talents somewhere else because this man is not going to give up this dream of having her. Rae and Hiroto relationship is about to heat up YES!!!. Thanks for the update D&L

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2016 02:19 pm
Title: Explosion

Good stuff!

 Reviewer: Forks and Knives Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 12:20 pm
Title: Explosion

This is a great story. Please continue

 Reviewer: Water Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2016 01:15 am
Title: Explosion

you are a wonderful writer in many ways:  I can visualize the characters, feel the pain and see the growth of the charaters.  You have grown and found your way to be at peace... Please continue share your gift with your fans.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 01:51 am
Title: Explosion

Historic is all man.  He's a real man and I live how he's protective, sexy, sensitive, intelligent, honest...so many endearing qualities.  Rae is gonna get it soon, but the right way. This chapter was perfect.  Thanks for all the updates, of course I'm waiting on the next one!!!  Oh and Rossi is on my nerves too!  He needs to get over it and move on. 

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2016 01:17 am
Title: Explosion

Wow, Rossi is such a ahole.  Who was that trick, who said that Rae got around?  That heifer knows nothing about Rae to make that assumption.  THe scene where Rossi got tossed out of the gala made me smirk.  Why did Roto allow Rossi to get the best of him?  That kiss between those two was coming home after being on a mission for years, just beautiful.  Rossi and Hoa are both in denial but Rossi is weak like Hoa.  Looking forward to confrontation between Rae and adoptive donors.  They are not better than her biological mother!  Thank you for updating so swiftly!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2016 05:43 am


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