Reviews For Transcendence
Title: Fruition

Congratulations! What a masterpiece. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <3 I sincerely appreciate it! :) 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 05:25 pm

Title: Fruition

Awesome sauce!!!  Rae and Roto can finally move and love unfettered.  Hoa finally got the message.  Hoa has finally left the building.  She finally realized that Roto's love was like, 7 UP she never had it, never will.   Who knew that his incubator was insane in the membrane?  Eri or should call her Mizu, just how many people did she kill?



Author's Response:

HEHE YAYYYY I GOT AN AWESOME SAUCE!!! <3 <3 <3 WOOHOO!!!! LOLLLL Yes "Hoa" is finally gone LOLLLLLLLL! Yep I wondered how y'all would react to that! <3 "Mizu" took a lot of lives to conceal what she had covered up! Not only her sister but those who had gotten wind of who she really was. Why do you think she "exiled" Hiroto's grandmother? She darn near sentenced her die BECAUSE SHE KNEW! And Hiroto's grandmother was trying to protect him from her and show him the truth. Because Roto found this out, that is one of the reasons why he sentenced her to the same fate! Everything that dwells in the darkness comes to the light! <3 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 01:42 am

Title: Fruition

Wow!  That was so intense!  I'm glad to see that Rae and Hirito can get some closure, and move on to the next chapter of their lives. Love it! 😅



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3 ^_^

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 12:36 am

Title: Fruition

This update was very good. It makes me feel like i'm watching a movie. I pictured Roto turning his back on his mother and her attacking him. I really enjoyed this.

Author's Response:

Yay!! I am glad! Thing is I want to make this an actual movie! <3 So, I'm so glad it has this effect ehe!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 09:29 pm

Title: Fruition

I'm glad he closed that chapter of his life with Kiko and done it with honor. Now, his mother is a different story all together. This wicked witch killed her sister out of jealousy and tried to kill her son out of greed and in my opinion hate. I'm glad he gave her the same fate she gave his beloved grandmother. What goes around, comes around. Girl... I can't wait for there to be total peace in their lives. Thanks D&L for this wonderful update.

Author's Response:

You are so very welcome Ms. J! Thank YOU for the lovely review! <3 Oh yes, being a man of class, Roto wasn't going to end it any other way! And I wanted you to see that as he said... he did have some affection for her! I think for him the relationship felt even more wrong being that he looked at Kiko as a little sister. :)  YES ROTO SERVED THAT DISH COOOLLLLDDD! Mizu reaped what she sowed! MAN MS. J I CANNOT WAIT EITHER FOR THE PEACE! THEY DESERVE IT! <3 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2016 04:17 pm



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