Reviews For The Overture
Title: Chapter 4

Interesting, , though I can't get a firm read/feel of Jaime, the start of some of the conversations tend to be a little vague at times between who is now or who was talking. Show a better separation between dialogues. Other than, I like the story.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2016 07:35 am

Title: Chapter 4

Oh wow. Now she is all alone. I hope that bastard doesn't find her. And I really want to know more about ole boy. What exactly is haunting him like that? Alex doesn't seem like a bad person so what's the issue?

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 4

This story is still very mysterious right now and I can't wait to find out more about Genevieve's husband and whatever it is Jamie is hiding from. 

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 23 2015 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 4

wonderful update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 04:33 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Soooo, she is with child; terrified and alone in witness protection. Dhe is in a small country /southern town, so she is bound to noticed. 

Did Lanzo kill his Aunt? What line of work is he in? Ifhe didn't kill her, why didn't she call the policeor excape herself?

I positively love this story so far. Keep up the great writing. 

Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 02:45 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Whoa!  Pretty intense. Can't wait for the update to understand where all this is coming from. Also to know where Genevieve/Leslie is headed. Update soon. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Interesting update! Hope she stays ok.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 03:49 am

Title: Chapter 4

What happened to Jaime and will getting to know Leslie/Gen be the cure?  Is the aunt still alive? Thank you for updating this story!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Lord she pregnant. And Jamie knows Alex? So he must be trying to escape something that deals with him. Was he with the government before?

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 01:12 am

Title: Chapter 2

That has to be scary. Living life like that. Why does Jamie love being alone so much? Can't be that bad

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 1

Dang witness protection?? This man is horrible! Kill him in his damn sleep! I'm glad his aunt snuck her off. How can you treat your wife like that when you saw what happened with your own mother?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2015 12:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting update! Wonder what was in Jamie's past to cause him to react like that? Did he work with Alex before? Can't wait to see the interaction between Gene and Jamie.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 3

Does Jaime know Alex? Did Alex use to be FBI agent?  What crimes are Lazano being accused??   So good and I am so hooked!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 02:07 am

Title: Chapter 3

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm ... Could someone be expecting?  

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 10:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Great update! Hope she be ok.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

Suspenseful!  I like it so far!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 14 2015 10:55 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I absolutely love the first two chapters.  I look forward to reading more.  

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

So she is pregnant by that fool, I know that she is afraid. Genho your husband didn't love you, he beat you and treated you shit.  Genho be glad that you got away from that asshole. Quit the crying and just be happy that you are still alive. That your baby has a chance to unscathed by your abusive relationship with it's donor.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey! More please! Hope Lorraine is ok.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 09:09 pm

Title: Chapter 1

She's gaining weight. Could she be pregnant by that f!cker?

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 06:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am  intrgued, please continue!   Lazano  needs to be shot!!  I have never of anyone being placed in witness protection for domestic abuse, but I like the concept. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2015 04:53 pm



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