Reviews For STANDING FAITH
Title: TRAINING II

Hopefully Conrad wifi find out before he goes home for thanksgiving that the baby is not his.  At nine pounds plus, this is not a premature baby!!!!

Heather's mom may have figured it out.

WAKE UP CONRAD!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 05:40 pm

Title: PREVIEW

Poor Conrad. He is all excited about becoming a dad. What will he do when he finds out the baby isn't his.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 05:21 pm

Title: TRAINING

Somebody has to put that Ron in place!!!!

He has made it because of who his dad is. He is not preparing for the test because he feels his dad Is going to get him in the SEALS. Somebody has to bring him down a notch or two. He sounds racist against women and blacks. 

Conrad and Faith needs to watch him, especially Faith. I hope she is good in self defense.

Reviewer: Macy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 05:10 pm

Title: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

Please let Conrad find that Lukas is not his son, it will hurt him for sure but it would be better is knows the truth now than 18 years later.

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 03:43 pm

Title: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

Very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 12:33 pm

Title: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

It was good to read about someone being in Faith's corner.  Her incubators are and were truly vile and evil people who don't deserve to still be breathing.  So Conrad will soon find out that his fiance's baby isn't his?  Miss. Ho shouldn't have any claim to Conrad's miltary pension!!  I am looking forward to Conrad kicking Miss. HO to the curb.  I really want Faith and Conrad to open to each other so he can help Faith truly heal. Make her parents pay for what they did to Faith!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 12:02 pm

Title: A YOUNG GIRL'S DREAM

See that's what ticks me off about some people, they always tries to stop a person from growing or living, they just want to see them sad and depressed. I'm happy Faith had Miss Parrington in her corner and a great role model as Admiral Howard. Thanks for the update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 11:31 am

Title: TRAINING II

This damn girl is foul as hell. I can't wait for him to find out that that baby is not his. Then he can move on and get with Faith. LOl. I like that Conrad is willing to go to bat with Ron for Faith, shows that he is a good man.



Author's Response:

Yeah still thinking about if he should find out after they take the official PST or afterwards. Ron's only purpose in the story is pretty much Howard in a diffrent form and Faith will have to confront her past once more time but she will be stronger. Conrad is still very much in love with Heather so his realtionship with Faith won't be for a while.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2016 03:22 am

Title: TRAINING II

Oh my gosh, lol wait till him or his mother put two and two together... Cause it's about to go down! 



Author's Response:

Yes exactly I'll definitely keep y'all posted on that.

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 08:44 pm

Title: TRAINING II

Now Heather knows damn well she's wrong. Lukas isn't Conrad's child and it's as obvious as the blonde hair on his head. She's going to end up hurting both of them in the long run. I love how close Conrad and Faith are getting. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2016 07:41 pm

Title: TRAINING II

"Three things cannot be long hidden: the sun, the moon, and the truth" by Buddha. The truth will eventually come out, and when it do it's going to hurt a lot of people, most of all the baby. A part of me thinks Conrad has some inkling that something is not right, why wouldn't she show him the baby, hair and all. I like Faith's drive, some people succeed because they are destined, but most because they are determined. Thanks for the update MP



Author's Response:

Conrad is of Irish American descent with reddish brown hair so he would have known something was up if Lukas didn't have on his newborn hat. The truth already came out in the child's genetics and he can't help that and Heather knew damn well what she was doing.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 11:02 pm

Title: TRAINING II

I know this woman is not going to pass this child off as Conrad's, what if something was to happen and this baby needs blood or some health information from the real father, what's she going to do then. All i see is pain and drama for Conrad. I like this update!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 06:26 pm

Title: TRAINING II

I really hate Heather, passing her baby as Conrad's.  I want her busted and disgusted as well as homeless!!  I want Sean to due Heather fo reveal the true patetnity of Lukas and then for full custody. That ho needs to go down!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 02:28 pm

Title: TRAINING II

I hope he finds out soon that the baby isn't his. I don't want Conrad walking around like boo boo the fool.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 12:28 pm

Title: DEMONS STILL HOLDING ON

It's sad that she is still tormented by him all these years later. I'm thankful that he did stand up for her.. I don't think I could have held my tongue, rank or not. He is a butthole for no reason. Does Ron secretly like her or something? Or is he insecure that a woman is doing better than him and will get into SEALs training over him? I do not like Dominique. She can be such a bitch, but I somewhat understand. I want to sleep too. LOl.

Update soon!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 02:28 am

Title: DEMONS STILL HOLDING ON

so glad back your back with this wonderful story...very good update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 09:27 pm

Title: DEMONS STILL HOLDING ON

Faith needs therspy, het mentsl healtj will affect her ability to be a Navy Seal.  Talk to some Faith. When is Vonrad going to find that his fiance is a lying ho??  Just thinking about her makes my teeth itch!   Thank you for updating!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 06:23 pm

Title: DEMONS STILL HOLDING ON

My hope is for Faith to release that power she thinks Howard has over her. I'm liking Conrad more and more. Thanks for the update MP.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2015 05:55 pm

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

Good story!!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 01:55 pm

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

that's just sad 

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 06:42 am

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

I figured that's how she got away. Its sad that her own damn parents don't even support her. To hell with them, I would have shot his ass several times. Used all the damn bullets. So how was she able to get into the military? That record alone is a complete red flag.

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 02:43 am

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

At last ... Finally free of that bastard! 😤

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2015 12:31 am

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

I read this chapter again and it pissed me off even more the second time.    Really, she was turning 16 married to the man that she shot, did anyine see anything wrong with that situation? Did the Public Defender not ask her about her life?  Her migldigstion was the fact that she was to forceed to marry Howard at the age of 13. Further mudigation is being forcrd to have sex eith digusting sex offender and the physical abuse whicj caused her to miscarry. No one came to her aid!  Faith needs counseeling bad!!  I want to hit Ferry in his throat real bad!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 11:48 am

Title: SOMBER SIXTEEN

I hope the overruled the thing and had cameras seeing what happened to her before the date. Especially if she is a victim of abuse. I'm so pissed off its not even funny, but I get its just a story. At the same time my mother is a victim of abuse but like others he stops and she stays. 

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 02:58 am

Title: PREVIEW

Oooooooh THAT AINT HIS BABY?!!!!!! /(0o0) 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 02:39 am



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