I'm so glad you brought this story back. I really love Willow because I can relate to her on so many levels. In an early chapter Willow said they needed each other and they do. The initial attraction was sizzling and they're love will be explosive!! The way Sebastian handled her little friend at movie night was awesome. The raw emotion Willow had when she found out about the little game Simon and his friend played made me actually cry for her. The fact that Bas proved a point that he's into her and, unbeknowst to her, that he killed Simon for her is a deeper level of love, commitment, and protection of her. They are lucky to have found each other that fateful day in the park, otherwise they'd still be miserable. I can't wait to see if Bas' background is still the same. I love this story!! Update with a quickness because I'm eager to see the new twists and turns develop. I hope you bring "Baby It's Cold Outside" back too!! Yay for revamping an already awesome story.
Wow, thank you so much. I am so happy that you can relate to Willow and her struggles. I think being able to identity with a character in a story is one of the most powerful things a reader can experience. Knowing that someone relates to my characters is an overwhelming thing for me too. In the first posting of this story, Sebastian was mysterious and sexy, but he wasn't fleshed out in the way I wanted him to. Their relationship was too isolated for it to be a big part of Willow's life. I felt like I had to make him meet her friends, her first lover, and her parents to show him that she is an innocent pure woman with a life full of people she loves compared to him who doesn't have anyone at all even if his parents are both still alive. I am glad you enjoyed those new additions. And Sebastian's background has changed significantly and I decided to introduce it in later chapters though and not just introduce it in tiny flashbacks. BICO is next on the list to be revamped from head to toe and I think you will definitely enjoy the new changes to that one!Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2015 02:35 am
Yes, can honestly say I'm not sorry Simon had the same ending and I still don't like that old skank Juliette!
I wonder what Farrah is going to choose?
I think Sebastian doing what he does is very extreme and not warranted, but it shows what he is willing to do for Willow even if she doesn't know it. It is a token of his commitment and dedication to her. He doesn't help that he has these animalistic urges that take over and clouds his ability to think. So I decided to keep Simon's ending. However, in this revised version it has a bigger meatier plotline than the last story that focused on it for like two chapters, LOL. As for Farrah, I think you will be surprised about what will happen next.Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 08:54 pm
Willow needs Sebastian and he needs her...but what will become of their romance if the truth is revealed?
Every couple goes through their ups and downs. If or when Willow discovers the truth, she will most likely do the most sensible thing and run like a bat out of hell. However, she won't get far either from her own admission or Sebastian is in her way.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 08:10 pm
Woman, you ae doing that damn thang! I am loving the growth that Willow is showing. Sebbie Seb is a bad mofo. I love this ebook!!
Thank you so much. I am so happy that you like the new additions and the new character development. Sebastian is something else, isn't he? LOL.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 07:58 pm
I have been waiting for an update on this one. This is one of my favorite stories of the Chamber. This rewrite is so good. Willow was one of the few characters that I could connect with and I feel so many of her issues about her weight.You get more invested in Willow and Sebastian. There is more building in their connection. Love the introduction of her friends and how he interacts with them. That ole mother and sister need their acts tuned up. I can't wait to see how this will go. You are doing a beautiful job with this.
OMG, thank you so much. It makes me so happy to know that this story is a favorite of yours. I am so glad that you are able to relate to Willow. I do too. I think she has very common struggles that so many women deal with on a daily basis. It is a wonderful thing when you can identity with a chapter. I am glad that you like the new additions. I hope you like all the new additions, twists, and turns to come.Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 07:09 pm
I absolutely love this story! I stumbled on it last night and have enjoyed reading it! The only downside is now I am caught up and am itching like a crackhead for the next chapter! LOL. Hope you update soon.
LOL, I will try to get your next fix! I promise.Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 05:30 pm
I missed this story. I really want to see what happens next.. I totally can relate to willow, except I'm the fat and ugly big sister.
In a lot of ways, I see me in Willow as well. The only difference is that I do not have any siblings, but I had a lot of beautiful friends in highschool. Everyone in my family is very attractive except me by society standards. I have a lot of attractive friends now and I am the least attractive out of them by society standards. I think she is a very relatable character. However, what we all have to understand is that we truly all beautiful, ya know? I might not look at Beyonce or Halle Berry, but I am beautiful in my own right and so are you.Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 03:57 pm
So happy to see this story back. Looking forward to reading. Liked the mystery around Sabastian before but will read with enthusiasm bc I am in like with these characters. Hope to see the other stories return as well. Thank u for updating.
The mystery about Sebastian is still here and his background story has changed significantly compared to the one in the first posting of the story. His Mercy is the next one to be reposted.Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 02:02 pm
jesus...! this story is so damn hooot...! and flippin good! loved that willow stood up for herself - she needs to do that more often. bit sad that simon had to die before willow got the chance to ripe him apart but sebastien did that instead so i'm good, lol! i didnt want the story to end so sorry MJ but i'm going to be greedy and ask for MORE and PLEASE SOOON!!!
There are a lot more chapters coming, I promise! I hopefully there won't be too much a wait because it is mostly me either creating a chapter or two and revising an orginial chapter from the first story.Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:24 pm
I said before that Sebastian is a grown man. Smh, I am glad he's not changed. Did Simon really have to die though?
He didn't have to die per say, but it is great character development for Willow and Sebastian.Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:16 pm