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Title: Battle Half-Won

I like this version a lot...needs editing for significant grammatical errors in some chapters...



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Oops, sorry about the errors.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 02:31 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

I hooe so, Juleit and his parents need to die. Willow yiur is an assassin jusy acxept it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 08:13 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

Really love how complex both the characters are in this story. I love this story! Do you write on any other sites?

 Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2018 06:43 am
Title: Battle Half-Won

The Authority will wish they never f@ck'ed with Will! 🤭🤫🤗

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 07:07 am
Title: Battle Half-Won

 I'm so glad you updated  this story. I love these two just as much as Sugar and Chef! Good for Willow for explaining why she doesn't want to have a baby right now, but she knows Seabstian isn't going to stand for it. He and Willow are having a baby...this baby! I love how Willow has become.more confident with herself within this relationship and even when they were separated. Sebastian has a head strong woman on his hands that's doing everything to make this relationship right, including calling tjebsperm donor to set up a meeting. I am intrigued to see what they come up to blackmail  the organization! Updateagain...soon.

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2018 02:06 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

They should assemble a team of people the Authority hurt to take them down👍and start with Juliette😌

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2018 10:24 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

I love Sebastian and Willow.  I hope this crazy plan works and all of these terrible people ruining Sebastian and Willow's lives get their comeuppance.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2018 09:35 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

please let juliette get what she deserve 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2018 05:03 am


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