More more more!!! This is awesome, Sebastian is all tall, dark and handsome but I hope his dark side doesn't bite them.
Sadly, it will, but that is where all of the fun (at least from a writing perspective) comes in, LOL.Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 04:33 pm
I missed this story. I really want to see what happens next.. I totally can relate to willow, except I'm the fat and ugly big sister.
In a lot of ways, I see me in Willow as well. The only difference is that I do not have any siblings, but I had a lot of beautiful friends in highschool. Everyone in my family is very attractive except me by society standards. I have a lot of attractive friends now and I am the least attractive out of them by society standards. I think she is a very relatable character. However, what we all have to understand is that we truly all beautiful, ya know? I might not look at Beyonce or Halle Berry, but I am beautiful in my own right and so are you.Reviewer: dreamama Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 03:57 pm
I love this story. That is all
Aw, thank you so much!Reviewer: allimetayer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 02:44 pm
So happy to see this story back. Looking forward to reading. Liked the mystery around Sabastian before but will read with enthusiasm bc I am in like with these characters. Hope to see the other stories return as well. Thank u for updating.
The mystery about Sebastian is still here and his background story has changed significantly compared to the one in the first posting of the story. His Mercy is the next one to be reposted.Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 02:02 pm
jesus...! this story is so damn hooot...! and flippin good! loved that willow stood up for herself - she needs to do that more often. bit sad that simon had to die before willow got the chance to ripe him apart but sebastien did that instead so i'm good, lol! i didnt want the story to end so sorry MJ but i'm going to be greedy and ask for MORE and PLEASE SOOON!!!
There are a lot more chapters coming, I promise! I hopefully there won't be too much a wait because it is mostly me either creating a chapter or two and revising an orginial chapter from the first story.Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:24 pm
I said before that Sebastian is a grown man. Smh, I am glad he's not changed. Did Simon really have to die though?
He didn't have to die per say, but it is great character development for Willow and Sebastian.Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:16 pm
Yes, yes!!! I did the happy dance when I saw this story back. I am enjoying the new changes and can't wait for more. I have missed Willow and Sebastian soooo much!
I am very happy that you are enjoying the changes. There are a lot more to come. More new chapters to flesh out the characters better and fill in the blanks.Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 12:37 am
Can we get an assembly of Sebastians? Damn, if that man ain't the ONE.
Willow, you just won't heed my warning. That mouth of yours, gurl.
MJ, thanks for the bonus chapter. I think I enjoyed it as much as Willow did. ;)
If only, chica. If only. I would ship him worldwide, LOL. Willow does have a smart mouth, but that's what Sebastian loves about her!Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 12:35 am
I really hate her mother and sister, her father makes me ill!! Why does he allow his wife to treat Willow like she does?
Willow's father is the perfect example of an oblivious man. He generally doesn't pick up on things unless it is happening right in front of him and only then he acts. Otherwise, he thinks his wife and daughters are getting along just fine.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 11:41 pm
Home. Yep, that's where you are Willow. Bastian knows exactly what he wants.
Home is definitely where the heart is! I've always enjoyed writing these characters because their journey is an intense kind of experience for me.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 11:01 pm
Nah, Bastian is ALL man. DAMN!
Oh Willow, there is so much to you than the physical. I really like her. And while she has some issues, she's stronger than most who have to deal with being judged by looks alone.
And yeah Willow, that smart mouth is going to get you into so much trouble. Bastian might just make you put it to better use. :)
MJ, onward. Loving it.
There are so many women in my life, including myself, that struggle with the same body issues and self-esteem issues as Willow. I, myself, am still struggling with my weight, but I am definitely on more accepting terms about it than Willow. However, she has a smart mouth, LOL! And Sebastian seems to like it.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 10:35 pm
So glad to see this back. Missed it. You rock, Chica!
For some reason, in this chapter, part/parts is replaced with parented. Just wanted you to know.
On to the next chapter.
Thank you. I noticed that too. I corrected it! I am going through the chapters for any mistakes. I thought I caught them all. :)Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 10:01 pm