He really need a grown ature woman to take care of him, because he won't do it.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed
[Report This]Date: February 04 2016 09:08 pm
Am sorry but this story is dragging and getting annoying with each update. Will there be chance of this story character showing some maturity.
Reviewer: bobbie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2016 07:43 pm
I had to do a serious catch up here haha. Saint and Naomi need to sit down and have a good talk. I think they need to get to know each much better and then their love will blossom :-)
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2016 06:54 am
Wow! I feel so sad for them both, why is she cutting herself? does she have mental problems?. And Saint can't be that stupid and not tell her he's bringing a woman home that she hasn't met before and she don't trust him. He needs his tail told off. And all the drinking that he is doing is not good either. That's how they cope by being self-destructive. I love this update!
Author's Response:
They're a mess lol. Thanks for reading :-).
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2016 05:33 am
Wow she has no faith in their new found foundation & love. He should have included her into the conversation haven't they had enough with the secrets & misunderstandings before. She needs some deep counciling & both them together needs to see a therapist. But he better get to her fast before more damage is done & he looses her forever. Hopefully some clues of the damage she's already inflicted on herself is left for him to see & be alarmed. Both need to learn how to communicate with the other more effectively before it's too late
Reviewer: kvgurl Signed
[Report This]Date: January 18 2016 09:12 am
Well they don't seem to be getting anywhere why didn't Saint just tell her what was going on before he left. And Naomi makes me want to shake her because she thinks Saint is a mind reader. Both of them need to get their acts together asap.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2016 06:56 am
Oh mon dieu, elle est si pathétique et faible elle pleure H24 😩
Author's Response:
I pride myself on being able to have read your comment without using a translator :-).
Reviewer: dada242 Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2016 11:22 pm
How is Naomi going to love someone when she don't even love herself.The self-harm she's doing to herself is a cry for help and Saint Luc is only looking on the surface. But how can he see her pain if he's in pain too. They both don't know their own worth. Saint wasn't thinking when he brought his sister-in-law and her children into the house. He should have told Naomi, where he was going and who he was going to be with, because she don't trust him anymore. I think they both are dealing with depression and they both need help. I'm glad you are back, I missed you. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
You're on to something Jacqua (as always). I missed you more! Thanks so much for reading :-).
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2016 08:51 pm
Nothing going on with these two, but a vicious cycle. Until they decide to communicate and stop crying and mutilating oneself this couple is a danger to one another. He could have told her where he was going and why, because he knows how insecure she is and she is scraping skin off and inhaling salt...WTH?!
Hopefully she is not pregnant bc until she can take care of herself, a baby should not be brought into this mix. I get loving hte man to the point she sniffs his suit for his scent, but it doesn't seem as though she loves herself.
IMO, she needs to finds something to do that will make her feel valuable, get some intense therapy, and grow up, while he needs to realize that although he is older, he ain't her daddy.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 17 2016 07:11 pm
I'm happy they decided where they are going to live as a couple. I don't agree with her giving up her education, she could try and transfer. She should not have to compromise her dreams in order to be in a marriage, a husband supports his wife dreams and do everything in his power to make it come true. Naomi needs to know that her education and dreams are hers and no one else's, was she pregnant? If so what happen to the baby?. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I think what you wrote in your last comment about the 7 ingredients for a successful marriage was sooo true, and a lot of the ingredients these two are missing. They have a long way to go....
thank you ever so much for reading :-)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: December 21 2015 01:23 am
Epic!!! Mooooore Pleasseeeee
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading !!
Reviewer: SheLikeSheWrites Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2015 11:12 pm
I'm partially confused. Did she miscarry, abortion what happen d then will she continue her studies in Paris or just give up her education all together? I hope not because she might really feel like a kept women. Then dang, these two need to learn to use their words appropriately to communicate. They both go from 0-100 in 0.5 seconds whenever they talk about anything but sex. They got along fairly well before, hope they can find that common ground again.
Author's Response:
They definitely get turned up so quick and get turned on without a a second's wait lol. It's hard figuring out the two with their bipolar selves lol.
thanks so much for reading :-).
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 20 2015 10:37 pm
Naomi and Saint are dealing with some deep issues and yelling and pointing the finger at each other is only making things worst. They need a time out because they are acting like little children. Saint you claim to love her so show it, Naomi you need to understand your part in this sham of a marriage. I only pray that a child coming into this situation helps to mend this relationship instead of tearing it apart. I do believe she is pregnant. I loved this update.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2015 06:08 am
Lmao vagina farts... I just about died I could feel the embarrassment while reading it but it was hilarious. They are weird together but I want to see where they go glad I stopped to checkout your story.
Author's Response:
lol I always laugh at that part too, such an awkward but intimate moment together. Thanks so much for taking the time to read.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2015 12:53 am
I would have a hard time believing Saint was in love with her too when he did cheat. This wasn't a too drunk to get it up but full blown menage ( 2 women ) and then say you are in love with me. I don't care what I say, you still chose to perform those actions. Now I don't agree with her treating him like he doesn't matter because every person wants to feel loved, cherished and wanted. I think Naomi has a lot of issues stemming from her upbringing and she has yet to discover herself and her strength before Saint came along. I think they need sometime alone without her school or his work, even if for a week or two in an attempt to connect.
Am I the only one suspicious she is pregnant? Plus Saint, can you really blame her for wanting you to wrap it up after seeing you with two women. I would have made you get an STD/HIV test before even coming near me again. What's love got to do with an HIV infection, nothing.
Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: December 15 2015 12:21 am
Saint-Luc has a heart and a conscious too, he knows what he did was wrong and hopefully he will own-up to it, but the man is human he has feelings just like she has feelings. Naomi is no saint either ( what she did was like telling a dog to bite someone and when they do you punish that dog) you don't tell your husband to go seek " sexual gratification" with other females and if they do, you get what you get. Right now they are in a unhealthy relationship. To me there are 7 key ingredients to a healthy relationship (1) Friendship ( they never had the chance to be real friends first), (2) Freedom ( they need to stop trying to control each other), (3) Honesty ( they need to tell each other truthfully how they really feel about their marriage and each other),(4) Trust ( this one has pretty much went out the window, but they can build it back if they are willing) they have to show each other that they can rely on each other and have confident that they are safe physically and emotionally., (5) Understanding( they need to know why? Saint drinks to hide his emotional state, why? Naomi runs away so she wont have to deal with conflict), (6) Communication ( they don't know how to talk to each other, and neither one listens), (7) A Healthy Sex Life ( I think they pretty much got this one ( on lock) as my kids would say. Naomi the man just said that he's in love with you and you are acting the fool, Woman Up already!!!. I think Naomi is pregnant, with all them mood swings, cravings and tears. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2015 09:43 pm
Why Saint whhhhhhy?
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2015 09:30 pm
Damn!! I feel for her. What do she do now? Stay? or Go? but first I would kick his @SS!!.
Author's Response:
Ha, you do have to remember that the way Naomi's been acting, she's no angel either :/
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 11:30 pm
Naomi was wrong!! she came at that man like he was a stranger on the street. All he did was asked her about her dreams and she went all high mighty on him. This man told you he didn't believe in marriage but he married you because that was what you wanted., he wanted you that much and you needed him that much. I know she is only 19 but a 9 year old knows what's appropriate to say to someone, and she's a runner everytimes something goes wrong she runs away, Naomi girl you need to grow up! you are playing a grow up game now!!. She said that he only married her for sex, this man can get sex from anywhere and he did! and I don't blame him at all. Naomi fed this monster now she has to live with it. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
You know these two to their bone lol, I always look forward to your comments. Thanks for reading :-)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 09:31 pm
Well, at least he used condoms. Damn! THey both need to grow up and she needs to walk away, while she can.
If she stays, then she may as well throw the condoms away, wash out the hoes underwear, change the sheets, sanitize the tub, and then lay on the floor as the doormat, so they can walk all over her some more.
Author's Response:
Ha, your comment had me laughing, but I guess we'll just have to see how it all turns out :-)
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 05:48 pm
Why is she such a mess mentally?
and is this the brother?
Author's Response:
I don't know about you, but so don't know of anyone 100% mentally stable.
I don't understand what you meant by brother?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 11:49 am
I think that ending is horribly harsh.
If she's self respecting at all she'd tell him to shove his money up his ass and leave.
Money isn't worth being disrespected, life can be hard without, but that shouldn't matter.
Author's Response:
Hm, we'll see what happens :/
Reviewer: Fran Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 04:03 am
She let her insecurity get to her & insiuated that she's just a paid sex toy that's married & he can go get someone else. Their feelings for one another is more than sex & they know it but want admit it to each other.great she feels guilty & she should apologize. The need to talk more. He's giving her a taste of what she said. Can't wait to see how this turns out.
Author's Response:
She's definitely getting a taste of her own prescribed medicine...we'll see what happens :-)
thanks for reading :-).
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 07 2015 03:51 am
I wish you had written a love scene, I was reading all the chapter fast because I knew the love scene would have been good. Sadly I was disappointed because there was none. I was cracking up at the vaginal farts..lol
Author's Response:
Lol, I usually skip over love scenes when I'm reading but more importantly I'd have to feel it to actually want to write about it, in this instance I just wasn't feeling it.
Reviewer: madison Signed [Report This]Date: December 03 2015 11:55 pm