Thank you thank you for this update.
Loving Gage. Continue with the updates.
Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 19 2017 10:51 pm
Loved this update. Fun and drama free for a change, (though drama is what I live for in a good love story ... and you never disappoint in that area 😃).
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 07:18 pm
Awesome sauce!!! Thank you for updating.
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 19 2017 05:51 am
Riley....ughhh!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2017 07:12 am
Please have "mercy" on us and update😩
This chapter indeed was smoking.
Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 07 2017 08:52 pm
Can we get an update soon?
Reviewer: Nena Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 03 2017 07:50 am
Update update update please 😥
Reviewer: Chelsea Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 02 2017 04:02 pm
Holy crap this chapter was hot.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2017 07:34 am
No worries about the chapter, I like this one better. Shame on Riley Pennington for lying to Mercy, but I know she will get hers in the end. Yeah for Gage and Mercy finally consummating their love for each other. I know this the calm before the storm, bring it on...I can't wait to read it.
I give this chapter Two thumbs up and I rate it 10 stars worthy!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2017 02:35 pm
Riley needs to go some where and sit down.
I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 15 2017 12:54 am
Holy crap this chapter was hot.
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2017 09:44 am
I loved the update. I like that they didn't consummate their relationship on such a sad note. Though, I'm surprised Mercy believed anything that Riley would tell her knowing how manipulative she can be, and that she would do just about anything to get Gage. She's green with envy.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 10 2017 02:31 am
I prefer the other chapter. This one was pretty cliché with her getting unreasonably angry from her antagonizer's claim. The other chapter had "meat" this one was just the usual.
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed
[Report This]Date: January 09 2017 01:18 pm
I liked this chapter too. I'm glad that Gale is alright, that nothing has happened to her and I'm glad that their first time was a bit more light hearted than it was in Foolish.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 06:01 am
Loved the update! I'm glad Colton cleared up that messy confusion about Riley. She was just trying to get Mercy to run away so she could get her teeth into him. I hope Mercy beats the shit out of Riley the next time she sees her :)
Reviewer: Sheyahne Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 05:46 am
I'm truly loving your rewrite of this story. Mercy and Coltan are absolutely adorable together. Keep it coming! 💋d83;
Reviewer: LimePalmtree Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 04:26 am
So good. Love the rewrite. Now my question is was Riley's fake confession foreshadowing for Mercy and Gage?
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 02:01 am
I enjoyed it
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 01:27 am
Riley is such a pest. When is she going away? Crazy chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 01:04 am
Why would Mercy believe anything that comes out of Riley's mouth? She is evil and jealous and those two things don't mix well.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2017 12:38 am
I have to say that I liked the "foolish" chapter more than this one. Not that this chapter was bad or anything though. Because I did enjoy it. To be honest, I don't like how much power Riley has and now with her pregnancy and stuff it doesn't seem as if it will get any better. Fake or not I feel like the whole pregnancy thing is rather a little cliche. I don't know which route this story will take from here on. But I will still give it a chance.
Author's Response:
The Riley pregnancy storyline was going to happen eventually even if I had kept the Foolish chapter. I had dropped a hint about it when Riley wanted to talk to Gage about something in the parking lot of the bar. I decided to push the storyline up and out of the way instead of prolong it by waiting. But as Gage said, Riley isn't pregnant. She was merely trying to manipulate the couple into separating over the possibility of it. She did this under the assumption that Gage didn't know anything about the birth control. I hope that explains some things and I hope you continue to read the story to see where it goes.
Reviewer: Ms. Starsz Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2017 11:50 pm
I tried to leave a comment on the last chapter, but it gave me errors. Honey, I am so loving your characters and their attraction. This love-hate thing they have going on is extremely intense. I can't wait to continue their journey. Oh and I agree with Mama Violet, if you're gonna get arreseted, then at least do something to get arrested for. Mercy should have punched Riley dead off in her mouth a few times. That would have definitely shut her up. The rating is only a 7 because I'm not finished taking this crazy-hot-steamy journey with your characters just yet.
[Report This]Date: January 04 2017 07:37 am
I must say, the prologue for your story has me intrigued. I can't wait to read more about your characters and to see how this story unfolds for them.
Reviewer: Sazaen03 Signed [Report This]Date: January 04 2017 05:36 am
I guess I'm like everyone else, looking for an update. I have missed this story. You left us high and dry. Please update.
Let us know what is going on.
Reviewer: Kia Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 26 2016 05:27 pm
PLEASE PLEASE update this story. It would ha good Christmas gift 😊
We we miss this story so much.
Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 01:10 pm