Thank you for the reviews the good and the bad. You guys are way cool, even the ones that got on me about my lack of warnings and spacing, thank u again.
Chapter 5 is actually kind of done, just waiting for the editing/beta-reader... I so need them.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: August 05 2016 02:57 am
Holy shit!! Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! YEEEEEESSSSSSS! Amazing first chapter! I am absolutely hooked.
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: December 30 2015 06:51 am
So sorry, I was editing my response to chapter 1 and accidently erased my responses and 2 comments.
The 2 reveiwers if you dont mind reposting your comments, I would greatly appreciate that.
To the reviewer of 1., 2., and 3.
1. Chapter 1 takes place in the present. There will be flashbacks, at least 2 so far. I dont want to give anything else away... so please read on to follow the sequence of the story.
2. The image I used; I thought her expression represented how she felt or will feel about her situation and I thought her complexion was carmel (her face that is), but then maybe I should check the tint setting on my monitor.
3. And I think you inquired about this being a dark romance, it is. I do not take offense to your comments for 1 and 2, or even 3.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2015 03:16 am
So sorry, I was editing my response to chapter 1 and accidently erased my responses and 2 comments.
The 2 reveiwers if you dont mind reposting your comments
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2015 02:33 am
Read this story on Literotica. I hope you will finish it, because I like the development of the characters. Some of the readers will not care for this story. They will get over it. Thank you Bain
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2015 10:07 pm
This is a great dark love story. I followed it form Lit, please don't change the format just because it does not fit the ideal flowery romance of some readers.
Reviewer: LOVE Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 28 2015 09:44 pm
Is that rapist the male lead ? if he is( and i guess he is), i just don't know what to say... like the previous reviewer said this story should have a rape warning, cause if i knew i definitly would have not red it. Too many women are raped every day and maybe some of the readers here. it's very disturbing to see the lead female taking pleasure while being raped. I really don't want my review to offend you but right now i feel really offended. Sorry and take care
Author's Response:
Your right, I spent nearly an hour on trying to select that as an additional warning, I will resubmit and try to add that as well as BDSM. It would not let me select those extra warnings as well. I do apologize. I will work on it right now.
Reviewer: siobhan Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2015 07:44 pm
You should have a rape warning because that disturbing and horrific. When I saw the summary I was intrigued but there was no indication that that would happen if I knew I wouldn't have bothered reading
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: December 28 2015 05:13 pm
Looking for more...nice beginning, please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: December 28 2015 09:03 am