Her shoulders were hunched as if she were attempting to make herself smaller.
This made me stabby. Good going Sinclairs. you've raised a delusional monster. Parents of the Year.
I hope she castrates him. And then slit his throat. He is sick mofo. And his "pals" are scum.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: January 01 2016 01:13 am
Holy shit girl! Your writing is so goddamn good, I'm almost rooting for Vincent. I love the way you've laid this story out, the character development is on point! I'm not sure I'm lkin this new character that wants Ember for himself though. I kinda want to see if Vincent is able to convince Ember, over time, to understand his obsession/undying devotion to her and fall for him too. Yes, I understand this is a dark story of an attacker and a vctim, I get that, but I gotta be honest. I've often wondered how many have ended up with their stalker, not knowing they were surveiled and watched for long periods of time. They just thought the guy was really sweet and attentive, and into them.
Anyway, Great writing! The imagery leaps off the page. Keep up the good work!!
[Report This]Date: December 30 2015 08:02 am
After reading the reviews, I will say that Ember wasn't taking "pleasure" out of being repeatedly raped. Orgasm is a physical response to the body being stimulated, whether there are feelings involved or not. There is nothing about what is happening to her that she's enjoying. She is the victim here. Ember, unbeknownst to her, has been stalked over the years by a person she's known half her life, who has attempted, and now succeeded in kidnapping and raping her. He's crazy, violent and a criminal. And it appears he's trying to break her through rape. Plus, now his partner has taken an interest in Ember, in order to do more of the same or worse.
Poor Ember. All I want is for her to somehow get away from these nuts intact. and put them in jail.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2015 04:08 am