This mofo is crazy. I so hope she doesn't get pregnant.
Girl, just hang on. Your time to punish this bastid will come. Just hang on.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: January 01 2016 06:08 am
If you need to select multiple warnings in your story, hold down 'CTRL' and select as many warnings as you'd would like when you are editing your story. There was some formatting/spacing issues with your chapters 3 and 4. I manually went in and corrected the issue. I hope your story's formatting looks okay to you now and if you need any more assistance, just let me know. Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the CTRL and the formatting issue, yeah I noticed it but forgot to check on it right before I submitted my work. Thank you again.
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2015 06:58 pm
Loving the story progression. Can't wait to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thank you, just waiting for my editor to get chapter 5 back to me. Oh, and GreenRoots... love Soraya a and Sean.
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2015 08:25 am
I can get with everything but the magic dick thing...
Reviewer: Pretti_Nerd Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2015 10:10 pm
Yeah, he'd kill her for the smallest infraction. He basically wants to lock her away and f*ck her to death. Batshit crazy he is! Again, I hope Ember finds some help to get the hell out of there!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 29 2015 04:20 am