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Title: Chapter 4

This is really good! I'm enjoying this!

 Reviewer: Alexandria Glass Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 03:12 pm
Title: Chapter 4

WTF!!!!!!!!!!!! Vincent has no redeeming qualities, I hate that a*hole. He needs to eat his own s**t and die.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 05:11 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Wow...this guy was never right in the head, huh?

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 07:01 am
Title: Chapter 4

I don't like Enrique either.  They are both lunatics but Vincent's a special lunatic regarding Ember.  Enrique or Ignacio will have to kill Vincent or they will die a horrible death.  Vincent dude you need to calm down.  He act like he's a 15yr old getting his first sniff of the vajayjay.  He took more time to prepare her on the river bank for the first reconnection then he has since.  Does he think he will overpower her hate of him with these tactics.  I am just curious to see where you take this story and how it will end: Vincent, Enrique or neither.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2016 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 4

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PUT SOME SPACING IN YOUR STORY!!

I really enjoyed the first 2 parts but I can't read these last 2 chapters like this!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 06:39 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Got off to a good start but the spacing is so distracting, I can't continue until it is fixed. Could you please put some spacing in between the paragraphs because its really hard on the eyes. 

 Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 4

The writting is bizzare too small all collage impossible to read. I'm gonna give up on that story. too bad it was a good start

 Reviewer: Benedicte Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 31 2015 02:37 pm


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